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Oh my gosh, this is coded so nicely! I haven't read anything yet but i just wanted to say that it all looks gorgeous.
Oh my gosh, this is coded so nicely! I haven't read anything yet but i just wanted to say that it all looks gorgeous.
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Thank you!
@Frostt
Thank you!
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@WithoutBonds - Sounds creepy but I have been subscribed to your thread because it is just so lovely ;o; I need to organize my clan lore like this one day, bravo!
@WithoutBonds - Sounds creepy but I have been subscribed to your thread because it is just so lovely ;o; I need to organize my clan lore like this one day, bravo!
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No, it's actually really flattering! If you'd like, all the codes I use are here. I know seeing how it's done can be really helpful sometimes
@Amaluna
No, it's actually really flattering! If you'd like, all the codes I use are here. I know seeing how it's done can be really helpful sometimes
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[center]DRAGON URLs (Relations Page Resource)[/center] [rule] SALEM [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=269830&tab=dragon&did=28239823]Salem[/url][/code][/indent] BARACHIEL [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27476381]Barachiel[/url][/code][/indent] DEVI [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27574724]Devi[/url][/code][/indent] BEACHCOMBER [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27724993]Beachcomber[/url][/code][/indent] ALPHONSE [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=14758550]Alphonse[/url][/code][/indent] TRANSMUTATION [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28110249]Transmutation[/url][/code][/indent] STARMAP [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27929086]StarMap[/url][/code][/indent] LANTERN [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28160581]Lantern[/url][/code][/indent] GLAMOUR [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=30965097]Glamour[/url][/code][/indent] BLOODMAGIC [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27575839]BloodMagic[/url][/code][/indent] VULTURE [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28296266]Vulture[/url][/code][/indent] TROVE [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28180327]Trove[/url][/code][/indent] FAHLERE [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29022953]Fahlere[/url][/code][/indent] AHAVA [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29902995]Ahava[/url][/code][/indent] CAVERN [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=8983528]Cavern[/url][/code][/indent] GEMINI [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29657826]Gemini[/url][/code][/indent] SATYR [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29657827]Satyr[/url][/code][/indent] SYTHYS [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=30316586]Sythys[/url][/code][/indent] BEETLE [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29657828]Beetle[/url][/code][/indent] UNDERTOW [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=30670460]Undertow[/url][/code][/indent] ETHEREAL [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=31372461]Ethereal[/url][/code][/indent] VOLCANA [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=1737416]Volcana[/url][/code][/indent] FORGERY [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=32996080]Forgery[/url][/code][/indent] HOARD [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=33830068]Hoard[/url][/code][/indent] CRICKET [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=32639004]Cricket[/url][/code][/indent] PEPPER [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=36067671]Pepper[/url][/code][/indent] EMBASSY [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=33819797]Embassy[/url][/code][/indent] CRIMESCENE [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=34004285]CrimeScene[/url][/code][/indent] UNNAMED [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=34484903]Unnamed[/url][/code][/indent] OCULUS [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=35332620]Oculus[/url][/code][/indent] CODEX [indent][code][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=33479294]Codex[/url][/code][/indent] HIGH COURT [indent][code][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2208277#post_27730350]The High Court[/url][/code][/indent] COLI TEAM [indent][code][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2208277#post_27730350]Coli Team[/url][/code][/indent]
DRAGON URLs (Relations Page Resource)

SALEM
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=269830&tab=dragon&did=28239823]Salem[/url]

BARACHIEL
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27476381]Barachiel[/url]

DEVI
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27574724]Devi[/url]

BEACHCOMBER
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27724993]Beachcomber[/url]

ALPHONSE
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=14758550]Alphonse[/url]

TRANSMUTATION
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28110249]Transmutation[/url]

STARMAP
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27929086]StarMap[/url]

LANTERN
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28160581]Lantern[/url]

GLAMOUR
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=30965097]Glamour[/url]

BLOODMAGIC
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=27575839]BloodMagic[/url]

VULTURE
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28296266]Vulture[/url]

TROVE
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=28180327]Trove[/url]

FAHLERE
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29022953]Fahlere[/url]

AHAVA
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29902995]Ahava[/url]

CAVERN
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=8983528]Cavern[/url]

GEMINI
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29657826]Gemini[/url]

SATYR
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29657827]Satyr[/url]

SYTHYS
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=30316586]Sythys[/url]

BEETLE
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=29657828]Beetle[/url]

UNDERTOW
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=30670460]Undertow[/url]

ETHEREAL
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=31372461]Ethereal[/url]

VOLCANA
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=1737416]Volcana[/url]

FORGERY
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=32996080]Forgery[/url]

HOARD
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=33830068]Hoard[/url]

CRICKET
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=32639004]Cricket[/url]

PEPPER
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=36067671]Pepper[/url]

EMBASSY
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=33819797]Embassy[/url]

CRIMESCENE
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=34004285]CrimeScene[/url]

UNNAMED
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=34484903]Unnamed[/url]

OCULUS
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=35332620]Oculus[/url]

CODEX
Code:
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=269830&did=33479294]Codex[/url]

HIGH COURT
Code:
[url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2208277#post_27730350]The High Court[/url]

COLI TEAM
Code:
[url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2208277#post_27730350]Coli Team[/url]
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Looking for constructive criticism!

As I'm hoping to improve my lore, responses on writing (including tone and use of bold/italics), formatting, creativity, and similar are all greatly appreciated. Posting is okay but if you want to PM that's fine too. Especially helpful reviews will receive a tip
Looking for constructive criticism!

As I'm hoping to improve my lore, responses on writing (including tone and use of bold/italics), formatting, creativity, and similar are all greatly appreciated. Posting is okay but if you want to PM that's fine too. Especially helpful reviews will receive a tip
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Now available: the story based on these works; Think Not of the Gods

Now available: the story based on these works; Think Not of the Gods
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@WithoutBounds, hello again! I've been working a bit on my clan history and since our clans are rivals, I wanted to ask a few more questions about yours if that's okay with you.


Is Querevage in the northern Sunbeam Ruins? It looks like it but I'm not entirely sure where it is in terms of the region map.


Which locations would have been around before Salem? I know that Flock Mason, Fort Riverstead, Port Major, and what's now the Quevren Ruins all were.


What type of beasts are there in the Host Forest that made Querevage build Fort Riverstead to protect themselves?


When was the clan that ruled the royal palace, now the Temple, defeated and when was the building converted? Before or after Salem? Did that clan have a name that they were called?


In TNotG, it's mentioned that a generation has grown up under Salem's rule. How long has it been exactly?


Did Salem just sweep in and take over by herself or did she have any forces? Was there any armed conflict? I'm aware of what happened to Blood Magic and Devi but were there other casualties?


It says Quereven was popularized as a written and spoken language by propaganda. Was this propaganda Salem's doing? Devi mentions her propaganda a few times during TNotG.


It seems Salem started a lot of construction projects after she came into power, the most notable one being the Capital, correct?


I'm asking this last question because it's an idea I've been thinking about for a while now, that a few dragons secretly supported Salem after her conquest for profit (by selling her goods, services, labor, financing, etc. at reduced rates).


Thank you for your time! Loving the new lair look!
@WithoutBounds, hello again! I've been working a bit on my clan history and since our clans are rivals, I wanted to ask a few more questions about yours if that's okay with you.


Is Querevage in the northern Sunbeam Ruins? It looks like it but I'm not entirely sure where it is in terms of the region map.


Which locations would have been around before Salem? I know that Flock Mason, Fort Riverstead, Port Major, and what's now the Quevren Ruins all were.


What type of beasts are there in the Host Forest that made Querevage build Fort Riverstead to protect themselves?


When was the clan that ruled the royal palace, now the Temple, defeated and when was the building converted? Before or after Salem? Did that clan have a name that they were called?


In TNotG, it's mentioned that a generation has grown up under Salem's rule. How long has it been exactly?


Did Salem just sweep in and take over by herself or did she have any forces? Was there any armed conflict? I'm aware of what happened to Blood Magic and Devi but were there other casualties?


It says Quereven was popularized as a written and spoken language by propaganda. Was this propaganda Salem's doing? Devi mentions her propaganda a few times during TNotG.


It seems Salem started a lot of construction projects after she came into power, the most notable one being the Capital, correct?


I'm asking this last question because it's an idea I've been thinking about for a while now, that a few dragons secretly supported Salem after her conquest for profit (by selling her goods, services, labor, financing, etc. at reduced rates).


Thank you for your time! Loving the new lair look!
@MaskofKeter

Thanks so much for your interest!!! I'll admit I've been meaning to ask you questions about your lore but I'm a shy bb. Regardless, as for your questions...

Clan Querevage somewhat deviates from FR's canon lore in a number of areas so I didn't quite have an 'official' location for the clan but I'd definitely place it on the North East border of the ruins.

BloodMagic wasn't really the conquering type so he gathered what he needed and then went isolationist with the clan so those are the only locations that were under Quereven control before Salem. She pretty much ate all of their neighbours...

An Emperor (supposedly) and... other things. Everything in there is laced with some kind of infection (Spoilers: It's the shade). It drips from the trees and dragons often leave with a fear of their own shadows. Most are watched. Some are attacked. The lucky ones succumb to the illness within a few, short, agonizing days.
The others are thrown back in "to be with their own kind".

The previous owners of the temple were known as "The Starcrossed" and they were an industrial clan primarily made of Imperials with snakier politics than Querevage, which is saying something. It fell around eight years after Salem gained power in what was one of her biggest conquests as it was previously the largest clan in the region.

I'd have to do some calculations with my approx. ages for everyone, but it's been almost 30 years. Maybe 27ish?

Salem was able to gain power by masquerading as a visitor to the clan. She was perceived as harmless because she cannot use magic. There was no true armed conflict, it was essentially Salem and Barachiel (whom she promised a share of the rule) vs. Devi and BloodMagic. It was a very 'no honour among thieves' situation because once the citizens realized that there was a very real chance of both BM and Devi being killed they noped right out of any loyalty they had. I'm sure some people were caught in the crossfire, but as it stands no one else actually died and stayed dead as far as it stands right now.

Querevage was a military clan before Salem, but it all honesty was really just a massive guild. But no, the popularization of Quereven was not Salem's doing, but BloodMagic's. (She actually tried to have it taken out of use but with no luck)

Yeah! Salem is very monuments-based when it comes to her religious worship (a large part of her character) which stems from a love of art and architecture. She was more than disappointed with the simple dwellings she found in the ruins but did appreciate the way they burned.

And thank you! I love getting questions ^^ ((And if you ever want to ramble about your lore please PM me or something I love hearing about it))
@MaskofKeter

Thanks so much for your interest!!! I'll admit I've been meaning to ask you questions about your lore but I'm a shy bb. Regardless, as for your questions...

Clan Querevage somewhat deviates from FR's canon lore in a number of areas so I didn't quite have an 'official' location for the clan but I'd definitely place it on the North East border of the ruins.

BloodMagic wasn't really the conquering type so he gathered what he needed and then went isolationist with the clan so those are the only locations that were under Quereven control before Salem. She pretty much ate all of their neighbours...

An Emperor (supposedly) and... other things. Everything in there is laced with some kind of infection (Spoilers: It's the shade). It drips from the trees and dragons often leave with a fear of their own shadows. Most are watched. Some are attacked. The lucky ones succumb to the illness within a few, short, agonizing days.
The others are thrown back in "to be with their own kind".

The previous owners of the temple were known as "The Starcrossed" and they were an industrial clan primarily made of Imperials with snakier politics than Querevage, which is saying something. It fell around eight years after Salem gained power in what was one of her biggest conquests as it was previously the largest clan in the region.

I'd have to do some calculations with my approx. ages for everyone, but it's been almost 30 years. Maybe 27ish?

Salem was able to gain power by masquerading as a visitor to the clan. She was perceived as harmless because she cannot use magic. There was no true armed conflict, it was essentially Salem and Barachiel (whom she promised a share of the rule) vs. Devi and BloodMagic. It was a very 'no honour among thieves' situation because once the citizens realized that there was a very real chance of both BM and Devi being killed they noped right out of any loyalty they had. I'm sure some people were caught in the crossfire, but as it stands no one else actually died and stayed dead as far as it stands right now.

Querevage was a military clan before Salem, but it all honesty was really just a massive guild. But no, the popularization of Quereven was not Salem's doing, but BloodMagic's. (She actually tried to have it taken out of use but with no luck)

Yeah! Salem is very monuments-based when it comes to her religious worship (a large part of her character) which stems from a love of art and architecture. She was more than disappointed with the simple dwellings she found in the ruins but did appreciate the way they burned.

And thank you! I love getting questions ^^ ((And if you ever want to ramble about your lore please PM me or something I love hearing about it))
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@WithoutBonds This is so well done! Can I use your codes for my own clan lore? I won't use much, it's just that I'm very lazy to code it all, I used to love coding but I did it so much that now I'm bored of it. :<

Alsooo uhm did you do the map yourself? How was it done / who did it , actually? It looks so "real" ;;
@WithoutBonds This is so well done! Can I use your codes for my own clan lore? I won't use much, it's just that I'm very lazy to code it all, I used to love coding but I did it so much that now I'm bored of it. :<

Alsooo uhm did you do the map yourself? How was it done / who did it , actually? It looks so "real" ;;
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