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@SuperNinjaDragon Hey! If you are still doing these I would like you to roast some of my works. I am only a hobbyist and learned everything on my own so please do it as harsh as you can, I am prepared ;w; For more works, if interested here is my [url=http://nympheaalba.deviantart.com/]DA[/url] These are some FR requests I did a while ago, these are only sketches and I went with simplish realizm. [img]http://img04.deviantart.net/f9b2/i/2016/197/b/d/requests_by_nympheaalba-daa93bs.jpg[/img] [img]http://img03.deviantart.net/6659/i/2016/228/7/8/collage_by_nympheaalba-dae3ob2.jpg[/img] And now some of my most favorite works of mine. On most of them I didin't want too much realizm, but rather I experimented with colours and shadows. [img]http://pre00.deviantart.net/722b/th/pre/i/2016/227/0/e/pentra_by_nympheaalba-dae0sbu.jpg[/img] [img]http://pre03.deviantart.net/1616/th/pre/f/2016/154/c/0/look_in_to_my_eyes__by_nympheaalba-da4tzgy.jpg[/img] Edit: I traded the old one for this one, I kind of redrew it today, just to see if I improved. [img]http://pre12.deviantart.net/948f/th/pre/i/2016/231/0/5/how_did_it_come_to_this_by_nympheaalba-daeir0a.jpg[/img]
@SuperNinjaDragon Hey! If you are still doing these I would like you to roast some of my works. I am only a hobbyist and learned everything on my own so please do it as harsh as you can, I am prepared ;w;
For more works, if interested here is my DA

These are some FR requests I did a while ago, these are only sketches and I went with simplish realizm.
requests_by_nympheaalba-daa93bs.jpg
collage_by_nympheaalba-dae3ob2.jpg

And now some of my most favorite works of mine. On most of them I didin't want too much realizm, but rather I experimented with colours and shadows.
pentra_by_nympheaalba-dae0sbu.jpg
look_in_to_my_eyes__by_nympheaalba-da4tzgy.jpg

Edit: I traded the old one for this one, I kind of redrew it today, just to see if I improved.
how_did_it_come_to_this_by_nympheaalba-daeir0a.jpg
VHyYC9J.png
[url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/skin/1878171][img]http://i.imgur.com/oqmp4aH.png[/img][/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/skin/1888380/25#post_20959817][img]http://i.imgur.com/clWhIdy.png[/img][/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/skin/1916453/15#post_21432206][IMG]http://i64.tinypic.com/2rng6dy.jpg[/IMG][/url] here we go! I haven't sent any in yet, I want to make sure I've polished them up properly. The images all link back to posts where you can see them on different dragons and so forth ^^ For the light festival submission I've been thinking about changing the shape of the light panels, maybe to something a little like a fleur de lis maybe? The lightning one might look familiar ;} harhar Looking forward to hearing form you

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here we go!
I haven't sent any in yet, I want to make sure I've polished them up properly. The images all link back to posts where you can see them on different dragons and so forth ^^

For the light festival submission I've been thinking about changing the shape of the light panels, maybe to something a little like a fleur de lis maybe?

The lightning one might look familiar ;} harhar

Looking forward to hearing form you
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@SuperNinjaDragon Yay for super harsh critique! I generally go for a fairly realistic style, with lots of contrast :) (Yeah, I'm pretty bad at describing my style)
Here's a couple of my most recent commissions
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@SuperNinjaDragon Yay for super harsh critique! I generally go for a fairly realistic style, with lots of contrast :) (Yeah, I'm pretty bad at describing my style)
Here's a couple of my most recent commissions
zOY7exp.jpg
nTQZvhl.jpg
FN41wce.jpg
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@Iriexiris Pinging myself so when I have an Imgur account and way to post my art on FR for critique.
@Iriexiris Pinging myself so when I have an Imgur account and way to post my art on FR for critique.
@SuperNinjaDragon
Come at me bro. No niceness accepted. Even if you can't tell me specifically what's wrong/how to fix it, tell me if it looks weird and I'll sort it out myself. Don't even bother trying to be helpful. I'm just here and in the mood to get roasted.

when will my art blog return from the war
@SuperNinjaDragon
Come at me bro. No niceness accepted. Even if you can't tell me specifically what's wrong/how to fix it, tell me if it looks weird and I'll sort it out myself. Don't even bother trying to be helpful. I'm just here and in the mood to get roasted.

when will my art blog return from the war
@Amerigland Sometimes your proportions aren't accurate. From time to time, try googling photos of people and drawing them to perfect your [b]proportion[/b] and [b]anatomy[/b] skills. Your proportions for humans vary from art to art - overall you still have good proportions though - especially for being 100% self taught! [img]http://pre12.deviantart.net/948f/th/pre/i/2016/231/0/5/how_did_it_come_to_this_by_nympheaalba-daeir0a.jpg[/img] When transferring a[b] traditional artwork into a digital medium[/b], you have to be careful - it can easily look misplaced. Try painting over the top of your artwork or even just using a different brush tool. You have great skills in composition, creativity and shading - continue to practice and delvelop these skills. Hope this was helpful :)
@Amerigland
Sometimes your proportions aren't accurate. From time to time, try googling photos of people and drawing them to perfect your proportion and anatomy skills. Your proportions for humans vary from art to art - overall you still have good proportions though - especially for being 100% self taught!

how_did_it_come_to_this_by_nympheaalba-daeir0a.jpg
When transferring a traditional artwork into a digital medium, you have to be careful - it can easily look misplaced. Try painting over the top of your artwork or even just using a different brush tool.

You have great skills in composition, creativity and shading - continue to practice and delvelop these skills. Hope this was helpful :)
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@SuperNinjaDragon Thanks so much for this, I'll keep working on them technical and anatomy stuff from now on. And with that digital media I am still trying to figure out the best combinations for it and I agree that sometimes it looks strange or misplaced.
@SuperNinjaDragon Thanks so much for this, I'll keep working on them technical and anatomy stuff from now on. And with that digital media I am still trying to figure out the best combinations for it and I agree that sometimes it looks strange or misplaced.
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@Amerigland and @Kiou :
Thank you to YOU. Judging your works helped me inspect my own mistakes, so really, the one I should thank is you!
@Amerigland and @Kiou :
Thank you to YOU. Judging your works helped me inspect my own mistakes, so really, the one I should thank is you!
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@CuQuoise Whoa, nice accents! You should have an accent/skins shop. I think the fae skin needs no further fixing and it looks good on a wide range of colours. On the other hand,[b] adding more [/b]to your guardian accent can make it more appealing and can fill in the blanks, although adding more isn't totally necessary: [img]http://i.imgur.com/clWhIdy.png[/img] Also, the white and gold colours may match black, white or gold dragons only - it isn't very [b]versatile.[/b] However, people will flock to this accent if their dragon is black, white or gold - so the accent's still good! As for this: [img]http://i64.tinypic.com/2rng6dy.jpg[/img] I'll buy it in a heartbeat! It looks absolutely beautiful! However, one of the little blue ball things (sorry, not sure what else I can call it!) [b]overlaps the line [/b]that defines the mirror's stomach. This interrupts the 3D look in the balls. P.S. Please tell me if you open an accents shop ;)
@CuQuoise
Whoa, nice accents! You should have an accent/skins shop. I think the fae skin needs no further fixing and it looks good on a wide range of colours.
On the other hand, adding more to your guardian accent can make it more appealing and can fill in the blanks, although adding more isn't totally necessary:
clWhIdy.png
Also, the white and gold colours may match black, white or gold dragons only - it isn't very versatile. However, people will flock to this accent if their dragon is black, white or gold - so the accent's still good!

As for this:
2rng6dy.jpg
I'll buy it in a heartbeat! It looks absolutely beautiful! However, one of the little blue ball things (sorry, not sure what else I can call it!) overlaps the line that defines the mirror's stomach. This interrupts the 3D look in the balls.

P.S. Please tell me if you open an accents shop ;)
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@SilverPhoenix Your ar[b][/b]t looks great but there's something missing... that's right! It's more colour! [b]Try shading with colours[/b] in varying shades instead of simply using black or white to shade. It adds more interest to your drawings and stops it from being boring. I got a great pic I posted earlier to show shading: [img]http://img04.deviantart.net/3a2b/i/2012/337/0/a/the_do__s_and_don__t__s_of_shading_by_wickyw-d5mxo64.png[/img] Be careful when colouring dragons with similar colours such as this: [img]http://i.imgur.com/nTQZvhl.jpg[/img] It can be hard to [b]differentiate[/b] between what is a foot and what is the body at first glance. To improve, try shading with higher [b]contrast[/b] or with [b]different coloured [/b]lighting. You have nice anatomy and composition and each dragon looks unique and has a life of their own - remember : practice makes perfect!
@SilverPhoenix
Your art looks great but there's something missing... that's right! It's more colour! Try shading with colours in varying shades instead of simply using black or white to shade. It adds more interest to your drawings and stops it from being boring. I got a great pic I posted earlier to show shading:
the_do__s_and_don__t__s_of_shading_by_wickyw-d5mxo64.png

Be careful when colouring dragons with similar colours such as this:
nTQZvhl.jpg
It can be hard to differentiate between what is a foot and what is the body at first glance. To improve, try shading with higher contrast or with different coloured lighting.

You have nice anatomy and composition and each dragon looks unique and has a life of their own - remember : practice makes perfect!
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