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MagicJade
Username: whiteraven90
Dragon name: Undrad
Dragon profile: http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=27344599
Personality: She believes herself to have an unquestioning, unwavering loyalty to her birthclan and her deity, but she has the same attitude toward the entirety of her family/lineage. She will be aggressive and intolerant toward anything that seems to threaten these things. She believes and trusts that her birth-clanmates and family members share these same principles with her, to the same depth.
Doesn't trust anything that isn't Plague. Practical-minded, assertive, principled, reliable, focused, mildly extroverted. Caring in her own hostile way, she shows no conventional signs of being caring, as that emotion is believed to be a sign of weakness. She has shown signs of having original thoughts that not everyone agreed with at home. Suppresses original thoughts for the sake of falling in line, seemingly without much heartache or protest.
Background:
Subspecies info:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H3G58EVwnY2f5XzW_XqZioP2vV7mWqQZeo3X9C8v904/edit
Birthclan info:
http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=89715
Brother of hers (his bio might be needed):
http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=26983453
My clan's short info:
http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=241266
I'm picking artistic license, so go nuts if you want, if you don't like my guidelines. But basically i'd like to follow up on her brother's story. The main idea was that she left her clan and her homeland to go after her brother, and for some reason she stayed with him (and apparently joined the mercenary faction). Regarding character development, it was about her having to decide between two equally important things: her family or her clan. That's about it.
Further fuzzy thoughts i had about it (Feel free to toss these ideas out if they are unappealing): She either left her birthclan on her own accord, to seek out her brother who fled, which would have been a tough decision for her due to the risk of being branded a deserter herself, or she was sent to either drag his butt back to their birthclan or to execute him for his desertion.
Also if some aggressive action would make sense anywhere, then i don't mind her wrecking my own daisy-sniffing Light/Wind/whatever dergs. Or vice-versa (somehow). Just a side-note.
One more thing, lore-wise. Her brother got some changes done to him, mentioned in his bio, which might be a point of interest at some point, but she will not get the same thing done to her, for whatever reason (just a little thing to explain his gene changes, which probably makes them seem less blood-related now).
Sorry if this was a bit too much. :u
Artistic License: yep
Preferred Writer: -
Order type: Medium or medium-large sounds good, but.. yeah, i don't know. I can't judge these things from word count. ^^" I could pay for medium-large just to be safe even if it turns out to be only medium or something.
PoV: perhaps third? First is ok if it's better. Past or present tense, either one would be fine by me.
Payment Method: gems
