@Raneva85
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He has lovely colors and nice genes. But I prefer not to use pet/butt with two different colors.
I don't know how to explain it, I just think it's too busy for me when they're two different colors.
But other than that, I think he's a neat dragon, I would buy one myself. I like how the secondary and tertiary match. The primary's color also looks nice with the other two colors. [/columns]
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He has lovely colors and nice genes. But I prefer not to use pet/butt with two different colors.
I don't know how to explain it, I just think it's too busy for me when they're two different colors.
But other than that, I think he's a neat dragon, I would buy one myself. I like how the secondary and tertiary match. The primary's color also looks nice with the other two colors.
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Roast this guy please :^)
@Imani He's lovely, or rather absolutely gorgeous, but I have to say that the different sorts of apparel don't match, like the snake with flower fall, and the facet and iridescent are too much of a contrast, since facet is very shiny; iridescent is a more matte gene. But other than that little thing, he's amazing.
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Imani He's lovely, or rather absolutely gorgeous, but I have to say that the different sorts of apparel don't match, like the snake with flower fall, and the facet and iridescent are too much of a contrast, since facet is very shiny; iridescent is a more matte gene. But other than that little thing, he's amazing.
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@DracoMalfoyy
That is a very soft child. The second and tert go together wonderfully!
I really like the back leg apparel. The cuffs aren't terrible either, but they're a bit more on the cooler side of the color spectrum than the rest of the dragon (also iri does that weird green butt thing that's too off-putting for my taste).
The hat, though? Not doing it for me. It's a very bold, vert dark color that does not compliment the softer tones of the dragon.
Overall, pretty dragon. Could use some softer apparel choices imo. Maybe silks? Possibly the peace dove? Jewelry, too.
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That is a very soft child. The second and tert go together wonderfully!
I really like the back leg apparel. The cuffs aren't terrible either, but they're a bit more on the cooler side of the color spectrum than the rest of the dragon (also iri does that weird green butt thing that's too off-putting for my taste).
The hat, though? Not doing it for me. It's a very bold, vert dark color that does not compliment the softer tones of the dragon.
Overall, pretty dragon. Could use some softer apparel choices imo. Maybe silks? Possibly the peace dove? Jewelry, too.
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I think he looks lovely! I'm absolutely in love with his hat and his rose. I'm not entirely sure what those ore on his back legs, but I enjoy the minimalistic dragon dressing. I'm not overly fond of pink glimmer on male sky dancers because I think the shading an highlighting makes it look like plastic. That being said, I love the whole inverse radiant thing gong on with his body and his wings. It looks really nice. Kudos to you for having such a great dragon.
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I think She looks really nice. I don't exactly love tundras, but her earth tones make it work in my opinion. Her apparel is a tad bit busy for my taste because she has some busy genes, but then again I am really spearing when it comes to dressing my dragons. I feel like I'm supposed to say something about the color of the okapi, but I really don't mind it. If I had to do one thing, I'd take away the Cherub and go for something more solid, like iridescent, metallic, or even basic if you wanted to. I feel like it would bring out the Okapi more. I hope I wasn't too harsh! If I was just PM me or something. I really like your dragon.
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I think he looks lovely! I'm absolutely in love with his hat and his rose. I'm not entirely sure what those ore on his back legs, but I enjoy the minimalistic dragon dressing. I'm not overly fond of pink glimmer on male sky dancers because I think the shading an highlighting makes it look like plastic. That being said, I love the whole inverse radiant thing gong on with his body and his wings. It looks really nice. Kudos to you for having such a great dragon.
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I think She looks really nice. I don't exactly love tundras, but her earth tones make it work in my opinion. Her apparel is a tad bit busy for my taste because she has some busy genes, but then again I am really spearing when it comes to dressing my dragons. I feel like I'm supposed to say something about the color of the okapi, but I really don't mind it. If I had to do one thing, I'd take away the Cherub and go for something more solid, like iridescent, metallic, or even basic if you wanted to. I feel like it would bring out the Okapi more. I hope I wasn't too harsh! If I was just PM me or something. I really like your dragon.
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firstly, nice lair!! i really like how you use the color wheel to find the best accents to match your dragons.
but absinthe jumped out at me. i love male imp and the color cream. and it works pretty well with his accent. but his accent fights with his tert for your attention and makes him look a bit busy.
i would suggest another accent or a tert like spines
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@KnightVanguard
firstly, nice lair!! i really like how you use the color wheel to find the best accents to match your dragons.
but absinthe jumped out at me. i love male imp and the color cream. and it works pretty well with his accent. but his accent fights with his tert for your attention and makes him look a bit busy.
i would suggest another accent or a tert like spines
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@Luxuryy
I looked in your lair, and though all your dragons are beautiful, my eyes immediately fell on Titos.
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First of all, he's not my perfect dragon because a) the eye color?? Water so doesn't suit him!! and b) I'm not a fan of Oilslick, or Hex and Smoke. But that's not really important. Even with those important qualities adding a bit of salt to the sugar, he's probably my favorite dragon because of his apparel. Though it may not suit others, I'm ALL for dragons drowning in apparel, particularly rich apparel!! Titos really reminds me of my GenOne, Aurora, my Light seer, and she also has a mess of apparel on her. I'm a sucker for those kinds of things.
I'm a huge fan of the Ethereal apparel, as well as the Legguards and Runescroll, just because they're so great for Light reps and all!! Literally, the only real apparel that I'd add to him are Solar Blades, that would tremendously improve him, even though he's really cool already!!
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I looked in your lair, and though all your dragons are beautiful, my eyes immediately fell on Titos.
First of all, he's not my perfect dragon because a) the eye color?? Water so doesn't suit him!! and b) I'm not a fan of Oilslick, or Hex and Smoke. But that's not really important. Even with those important qualities adding a bit of salt to the sugar, he's probably my favorite dragon because of his apparel. Though it may not suit others, I'm ALL for dragons drowning in apparel, particularly rich apparel!! Titos really reminds me of my GenOne, Aurora, my Light seer, and she also has a mess of apparel on her. I'm a sucker for those kinds of things.
I'm a huge fan of the Ethereal apparel, as well as the Legguards and Runescroll, just because they're so great for Light reps and all!! Literally, the only real apparel that I'd add to him are Solar Blades, that would tremendously improve him, even though he's really cool already!!
first page only please!! (note: Pete Girly's finished version is in his bio, so if you choose him, then please pay attention to the dressed up version, not actual version. ALSO STARLIGHT IS NOT FINISHED, AND PLEASE DON'T DO PEARL)
@DiamondNoodles
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[/url][nextcol]Well, your clan is starving, but that's an aside. I think Twilight is trying to do two things that don't work together. First is gradient, a good move with IriShim. It would work well because the colours already have a good contrast between pink and purple. In this case, piling pink near the head and purple by the bottom leads to a nice flow, but the flowerfall, tome, and pink silk are carrying the pink all the way down. Next there's cohesion, trying to get a good level of pink and purple throughout the dragon. But now there's too dark a purple at the base of the tail, and not enough petals to balance it. [/columns]
Maybe remove the tome, brown just doesn't work overall. Same with birdskull.
There's also two broken images in your bio. That's less criticism, than it is a note. Photobucket no longer allows third party hosting.
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Well, your clan is starving, but that's an aside. I think Twilight is trying to do two things that don't work together. First is gradient, a good move with IriShim. It would work well because the colours already have a good contrast between pink and purple. In this case, piling pink near the head and purple by the bottom leads to a nice flow, but the flowerfall, tome, and pink silk are carrying the pink all the way down. Next there's cohesion, trying to get a good level of pink and purple throughout the dragon. But now there's too dark a purple at the base of the tail, and not enough petals to balance it.
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Maybe remove the tome, brown just doesn't work overall. Same with birdskull.
There's also two broken images in your bio. That's less criticism, than it is a note. Photobucket no longer allows third party hosting.
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@chaimellow
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Look... I'm sorry, but that crackle just isn't doing it.
I though that it might have been the flowerfall that was bugging me, since it's a personal pet peeve of mine (I think in most cases it adds unnecessary clutter), and then I noticed the accent which was not very visible. You could see that the wings had some weird coloration going on, but what they were supposed to be was unclear. That's something I personally try to avoid because accents supposed to be just that- accents. Highlights of your dragon. I then realized that if the crackle wasn't there making her far more of a complex dragon from the start, the accent and apparel would have a much easier time showing off.
But...Despite that... She's still a nice dragon. That's a hard color combo to get working, and the crackle could pull a lot of weight if the accent wasn't there. I love her familiar, and overall her outfit is very angelic- and I'm kinda a sucker for those.
So yeah, despite all my griping, I think she's really a pretty dragon. Just... drop the accent or the crackle'^^
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be nice, but not TOO nice
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Look... I'm sorry, but that crackle just isn't doing it.
I though that it might have been the flowerfall that was bugging me, since it's a personal pet peeve of mine (I think in most cases it adds unnecessary clutter), and then I noticed the accent which was not very visible. You could see that the wings had some weird coloration going on, but what they were supposed to be was unclear. That's something I personally try to avoid because accents supposed to be just that- accents. Highlights of your dragon. I then realized that if the crackle wasn't there making her far more of a complex dragon from the start, the accent and apparel would have a much easier time showing off.
But...Despite that... She's still a nice dragon. That's a hard color combo to get working, and the crackle could pull a lot of weight if the accent wasn't there. I love her familiar, and overall her outfit is very angelic- and I'm kinda a sucker for those.
So yeah, despite all my griping, I think she's really a pretty dragon. Just... drop the accent or the crackle'^^
For the next rater- Here's my child
be nice, but not TOO nice
yeah i know i said i hate flowerfall but i was running out of unique flower apparel and that was all i could think of okay
@Xeronia
Hmm, Farore is quite a pretty dragon, most things about her fit pretty thematically except for her circuit (this isn't necessarily a bad thing though, a little variation is nice). The tan looks pretty good against her dark prim, but is making her wings look a little muddy, and I'm not too sure I like that.
Her accent is lovely though, and I think it's a great choice and goes well with the theme.
I'm still kinda up in the air about whether the colour of the buttercup ribbons looks good with her other colours, I mean, the purple fits but it's got that blueish tinge that makes it look sorta out of place, I donno if there's a more fitting piece of apparel though, so I can see why you used it.
Overall, I'd say she was a pretty nice dragon with a cute and well executed theme.
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Hmm, Farore is quite a pretty dragon, most things about her fit pretty thematically except for her circuit (this isn't necessarily a bad thing though, a little variation is nice). The tan looks pretty good against her dark prim, but is making her wings look a little muddy, and I'm not too sure I like that.
Her accent is lovely though, and I think it's a great choice and goes well with the theme.
I'm still kinda up in the air about whether the colour of the buttercup ribbons looks good with her other colours, I mean, the purple fits but it's got that blueish tinge that makes it look sorta out of place, I donno if there's a more fitting piece of apparel though, so I can see why you used it.
Overall, I'd say she was a pretty nice dragon with a cute and well executed theme.
Next person do him please
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@Ecci
O m g this boy is adsolutly beautiful! I love his colors! His apperal! I'm not a big fan of the mushrooms, but WOW! He weres them well!
What do you think of my volcanic island god? :D
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O m g this boy is adsolutly beautiful! I love his colors! His apperal! I'm not a big fan of the mushrooms, but WOW! He weres them well!
What do you think of my volcanic island god? :D
