@Midorikage
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Went with your avatar dragon, since you didn't specify. Interesting colors and I like how colorful and joyous he looks, but I'm honestly aren't fan of genes. Thylacine is okay, in my opinion, but Speckle and Clown really aren't the most desirable combo...
Apparel is cute and match his colors, however, adding an item or two would make his outfit even better.
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Please, slay this creature.
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Midorikage
Went with your avatar dragon, since you didn't specify. Interesting colors and I like how colorful and joyous he looks, but I'm honestly aren't fan of genes. Thylacine is okay, in my opinion, but Speckle and Clown really aren't the most desirable combo...
Apparel is cute and match his colors, however, adding an item or two would make his outfit even better.
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Please, slay this creature.
@Marmite
I like his colors but the apparel is confusing. Is he winter? Is he some kind of demon? Is he the living dead? the layering is also confusing. I honestly don't get it.
Try Hariken
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Marmite
I like his colors but the apparel is confusing. Is he winter? Is he some kind of demon? Is he the living dead? the layering is also confusing. I honestly don't get it.
Try Hariken
@Envysenpai
The greens really clash. It is like seeing a dark paper being messily scrawled by a highlighter. Although the clouds from the apparel helps to mask the clash, it is still really visible. Perhaps a less busy secondary will save her?
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Envysenpai
The greens really clash. It is like seeing a dark paper being messily scrawled by a highlighter. Although the clouds from the apparel helps to mask the clash, it is still really visible. Perhaps a less busy secondary will save her?
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@Axicia Can't really complain about her looks, she's gorgeous! An XXY imperial with 3x relatively new gem genes is a really safe bet for hatcheries to make a buck on, but as far as personal tastes go, even though she's really pretty I gotta say I find her really boring. She's even got a full set of night sky silks; it's fancy, but where's the creativity? The only thing that sets her apart is her UM accent. Just about anyone could own this dragon. [s]P.S. If your sig is a Nier reference I love you. :'D[/s]
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Swing away!
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Axicia Can't really complain about her looks, she's gorgeous! An XXY imperial with 3x relatively new gem genes is a really safe bet for hatcheries to make a buck on, but as far as personal tastes go, even though she's really pretty I gotta say I find her really boring. She's even got a full set of night sky silks; it's fancy, but where's the creativity? The only thing that sets her apart is her UM accent. Just about anyone could own this dragon.
P.S. If your sig is a Nier reference I love you. :'D
Swing away!
[center]@Tharn the dragon is beautiful and the outfit is gorgeous, but there are a few things that bother me slightly, for example I feel like swapping out the [b]Whisper's Mantle[/b] and giving her a [b]Red Mantle[/b] would work better with her color scheme, and then the [b]Spring's Breath[/b] also feels a bit to cluttered and kinda too much color (though I personally don't the [b]Spring's Breath[/b] too much) but could be replaced with the [b]Autumn's Breeze[/b] and work beautifully!
(and adding a [b]Autumnal Wreath[/b] would look [i]wonderful[/i] too!)
[img]http://www1.flightrising.com/dgen/dressing-room/dragon?did=27678995&skin=18010&apparel=6705,3697,2316,2504,13080,5398,15734,749,15693,15308,10375,15701,1094,15727&xt=dressing.png[/img]
As for my derg, I'm [i]really[/i] curious about what people have to say about Vincent:
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Tharn the dragon is beautiful and the outfit is gorgeous, but there are a few things that bother me slightly, for example I feel like swapping out the
Whisper's Mantle and giving her a
Red Mantle would work better with her color scheme, and then the
Spring's Breath also feels a bit to cluttered and kinda too much color (though I personally don't the
Spring's Breath too much) but could be replaced with the
Autumn's Breeze and work beautifully!
(and adding a
Autumnal Wreath would look
wonderful too!)
As for my derg, I'm
really curious about what people have to say about Vincent:
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Sumopian That actually looks.. hecka nice. Time to wait for Fall LOL. :p I hadn't really touched her outfit since scrolling her from a wildclaw, apart from slapping on her accent, which made her a lot redder than before, so thanks for the tips!
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Sumopian That actually looks.. hecka nice. Time to wait for Fall LOL. :p I hadn't really touched her outfit since scrolling her from a wildclaw, apart from slapping on her accent, which made her a lot redder than before, so thanks for the tips!
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@Sumopian So I like his overall color scheme, and his genes/colors match very nicely. He's one of the few dragons I actually like okapi on. Though I do think his apparel needs a bit more tightening up- it feels like there's not much of a cohesive theme. Here are my suggestions:
1. replace cranberry mage overcoat with aviator coat- covers his entire body and matches his other apparels better.
2. replace darksteel bracelets with gold bracelets- matches the smaller gold accents better and pops more.
3. take off the darksteel necklace- looks awkward so close to the banner
4. replace red bow with red and gold flair scarf- matches the sash better. aviator scarf is too bright red for his tert. (or keep the bow, I'm not very sure about that one)
Becomes this:
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Please be honest about Poseidon or Tiresias
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Sumopian So I like his overall color scheme, and his genes/colors match very nicely. He's one of the few dragons I actually like okapi on. Though I do think his apparel needs a bit more tightening up- it feels like there's not much of a cohesive theme. Here are my suggestions:
1. replace cranberry mage overcoat with aviator coat- covers his entire body and matches his other apparels better.
2. replace darksteel bracelets with gold bracelets- matches the smaller gold accents better and pops more.
3. take off the darksteel necklace- looks awkward so close to the banner
4. replace red bow with red and gold flair scarf- matches the sash better. aviator scarf is too bright red for his tert. (or keep the bow, I'm not very sure about that one)
Becomes this:
Vincent
Please be honest about Poseidon or Tiresias
@tybaltcatulet
lemme start by saying i love tiresias. he looks really cohesive and ugh i love gold and pink. but i'm gonna be talking about poseidon. i gotta be honest, i like his secondary color/gene but not his primary color/gene. poison isn't a favorite of mine, but i will give it points for having blue tones, at least, but the orange doesn't really fit for a sea god, in my opinion. i think his accent is too dark for him, so i would probably find a different one myself, and i don't really mind the apparel but i'd toss on the blue wing silks.
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lay it on me :0
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tybaltcatulet
lemme start by saying i love tiresias. he looks really cohesive and ugh i love gold and pink. but i'm gonna be talking about poseidon. i gotta be honest, i like his secondary color/gene but not his primary color/gene. poison isn't a favorite of mine, but i will give it points for having blue tones, at least, but the orange doesn't really fit for a sea god, in my opinion. i think his accent is too dark for him, so i would probably find a different one myself, and i don't really mind the apparel but i'd toss on the blue wing silks.
lay it on me :0
@Zabuza
Azura is quite a stunning dragon, their colours are lovely.
(except the wing layering is bothering me so much)
But I'd probably somehow find a way of tying in the yellow from his eyes and/or the green from his fairies to the rest of his outfit.
The first thing that comes to my mind is using a skin
[img]http://www1.flightrising.com/dgen/dressing-room/dragon?did=35480743&skin=17008&apparel=1749,821,2501,3642,24060,1098,24057,24054,24055,3702,11203&xt=dressing.png[/img]
However this covers up a lot of him and maybe isn't fantastic if you want to show off his colours.
So maybe try playing around with appropriate apparel like this?
[img]http://www1.flightrising.com/dgen/dressing-room/dragon?did=35480743&skin=0&apparel=1749,821,2501,3642,24060,1098,24057,24054,24055,3702,11203,23108,23110&xt=dressing.png[/img]
or
[img]http://www1.flightrising.com/dgen/dressing-room/dragon?did=35480743&skin=0&apparel=1749,821,2501,3642,24060,1098,24057,24054,24055,3702,11203,15696,15737,15745,15729&xt=dressing.png[/img]
another thing you could play around with is adding bits of the moonlight lace set.
All the best with him though! he's still quite stunning as is
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Next person, please do this guy
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Zabuza
Azura is quite a stunning dragon, their colours are lovely.
(except the wing layering is bothering me so much)
But I'd probably somehow find a way of tying in the yellow from his eyes and/or the green from his fairies to the rest of his outfit.
The first thing that comes to my mind is using a skin
However this covers up a lot of him and maybe isn't fantastic if you want to show off his colours.
So maybe try playing around with appropriate apparel like this?
or
another thing you could play around with is adding bits of the moonlight lace set.
All the best with him though! he's still quite stunning as is
Next person, please do this guy
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