So, a week ago I wrote and rewrote lore for the entire first page of my lair, and since then I've been so busy with ... life in general I guess and now with mistral upon us im gonna be busy with that the next week
But right now, I just need a moment to appreciate these two and the lore i have written for them - which I now, in a calm moment, realize i really, really like. Feel free to show of lore dergs youre proud of - or just dragons you're proud of in general:
Here they are:
Starkindler, the only crackle derg I've ever really liked:[center]
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[quote=Lore][center][b][font=century][size=7]Let there be light to be found even when all the stars have died[/size][/font][/b]
He was put into this world to find the light, hidden beneath the stones and in the crowns of blooming trees at night
He's found many another thing, like the lost and found dreams of other people, they thought they'd dropped for good
In the clan he serves mostly as a scavenger and bug catcher, though he usually ends up befriending more bugs than he catches, secondly he fills the role as a kind of psychologist and gentle guidance for many of he younger dragons
He also guides and comforts dragons about to leave the clan to serve the Earthshaker. With his calming, wise demeanor he's lead many a young dragon to no longer fear exaltation
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[font=courier new]>Aro/ace and agender
>Extremely quick movements
>Has very intelligent, gentle eyes
>In a queerplatonic relationship with Agnessa
>Really fond of ladybugs
>Extremely calming to be around
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And Agnessa, a genone XXY and the only mirror to ever steal my heart:
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[quote=Lore][center][b][font=century][size=7]Mom will fight you[/size][/font][/b]
And mom will win
Coolheaded scavenger and collector of things found in the world. Sometimes seen acting as guard for the clan leaders
Has the biggest maternal drive ever. Will 'adopt' everyone she likes on sight (no matter their age. [i]Yes, these adults are my [u]kids[/u][/i]) and protect them fiercely
She's in a queerplatonic relationship with Starkindler and is often found out on trips with him. She's become kind of the amazing aunt of everyone in the clan, and though she lacks the calming presence of her partner, she'll offer guidance and a loving home for anyone lost in this big, scary world
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>Really likes cheesy romance novels
>Could beat you up in a fight so fast
>Really likes flowers and tea
>World's coolest soccermom
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So, a week ago I wrote and rewrote lore for the entire first page of my lair, and since then I've been so busy with ... life in general I guess and now with mistral upon us im gonna be busy with that the next week
But right now, I just need a moment to appreciate these two and the lore i have written for them - which I now, in a calm moment, realize i really, really like. Feel free to show of lore dergs youre proud of - or just dragons you're proud of in general:
Here they are:
Starkindler, the only crackle derg I've ever really liked:
Lore wrote:
Let there be light to be found even when all the stars have died
He was put into this world to find the light, hidden beneath the stones and in the crowns of blooming trees at night
He's found many another thing, like the lost and found dreams of other people, they thought they'd dropped for good
In the clan he serves mostly as a scavenger and bug catcher, though he usually ends up befriending more bugs than he catches, secondly he fills the role as a kind of psychologist and gentle guidance for many of he younger dragons
He also guides and comforts dragons about to leave the clan to serve the Earthshaker. With his calming, wise demeanor he's lead many a young dragon to no longer fear exaltation
>Aro/ace and agender
>Extremely quick movements
>Has very intelligent, gentle eyes
>In a queerplatonic relationship with Agnessa
>Really fond of ladybugs
>Extremely calming to be around
Peace Dove
Apparel
Peace Doves are said to be the only bird that all dragon breeds refuse to eat. Their presence always portends fortune.
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And Agnessa, a genone XXY and the only mirror to ever steal my heart:
Lore wrote:
Mom will fight you
And mom will win
Coolheaded scavenger and collector of things found in the world. Sometimes seen acting as guard for the clan leaders
Has the biggest maternal drive ever. Will 'adopt' everyone she likes on sight (no matter their age. Yes, these adults are my kids) and protect them fiercely
She's in a queerplatonic relationship with Starkindler and is often found out on trips with him. She's become kind of the amazing aunt of everyone in the clan, and though she lacks the calming presence of her partner, she'll offer guidance and a loving home for anyone lost in this big, scary world
>Really likes cheesy romance novels
>Could beat you up in a fight so fast
>Really likes flowers and tea
>World's coolest soccermom
Copper Ore
Minerals & Ores
More valuable than gold in some respects.
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@TheThrane
I have never resonated with a phrase more in my life than 'Mom will fight you'. She is perf. She is literally the embodiment of my entire being I love her and will protect her.
I also think Starkindler would be friends with my boy Sigurros here
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[quote]As a hatchling Sigurrós was told he was ugly. Ugly by all standards dragons had. His colors weren’t desirable by anyone and the best he could hope for was that some clan would want him to train him for war. He was reminded every day that no one would want him, that even his parents thought he would never be anything but an Exalted sent out to fight for a deity. Not even guaranteed the Windsinger but any deity who would take him.
??So he ran away. Before he was even fully grown Sigurrós ran from home without a word to anyone. He didn’t know where he was going, or what he was looking for, all he knew was that he couldn’t stay there anymore. He couldn’t live in a clan who only told him he was a failure, a reject, because he wasn’t born ‘pretty enough’ to earn a high dowry to another clan.
??Eventually this led him to the edge of the Sea. There he found a ship that said it was going to some strange city out there where even ugly things like Sigurrós would be accepted. Seeing it as no other option Sigurrós scrounged up some treasure for passage and left for Mu. He arrived amid the teeming city, lost and alone. But he was not the ugliest there. There were dragons of every color in Mu. It didn’t matter that they were undesirable, they were there, and they lived.
??The words his birth clan had told him weighed heavily on him though. Sigurrós has no confidence and speaks softly, hardly ever speaking up for himself. It made it difficult for him to find a place in Mu and eventually he just turned to the Caravan to continue to survive. Nadalin was sympathetic to him and allowed him to join her clan. Once part of the Caravan he thought he’d find peace and acceptance with himself, since Nadalin did not want him to be trained as a soldier to fight for the Tidelord. She just wanted him to be happy. He did not find that acceptance and didn’t know what to do.
??Then Rhodon came into his life. The eccentric Wildclaw was looking for an assistant with his flower shop after the last one quit because Rhodon was too weird for them. Sigurrós tentatively applied for the position and Rhodon took him on instantly. Little did Sigurrós know that there were no other applicants for Rhodon’s assistant. Sigurrós was taken to the ship Peonia and Rhodon took him under his wing. He taught Sigurrós all about flowers and arranging and how to care for plants of all sorts and how to identify all types of flora. Rhodon didn’t care what Sigurrós looked like, he just cared that Sigurrós could work and would listen to him.
??Rhodon also knew that Sigurrós had self esteem issues and trouble speaking up for himself and he had no tolerance for any of that. He encouraged and even demanded that Sigurrós speak his mind often and whenever he wanted, even if it was to tell Rhodon he was acting like an idiot. Sigurrós had never been treated like this by another dragon, as if he was actually worth something other than a handful of treasure. He still ended up rather surprised when he ended up crushing, horribly, on Rhodon. He knew Rhodon too well by then though and knew the playboy would never give him the real relationship he wanted. So instead he just pined from a distance.
??Rhodon was a good teacher though and Sigurrós learned a lot under him about botany and scents. It led him to become an amateur perfumer, which he sells in small vials in Peonia with Rhodon’s elaborate flower arrangements.[/quote]
@TheThrane
I have never resonated with a phrase more in my life than 'Mom will fight you'. She is perf. She is literally the embodiment of my entire being I love her and will protect her.
I also think Starkindler would be friends with my boy Sigurros here
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As a hatchling Sigurrós was told he was ugly. Ugly by all standards dragons had. His colors weren’t desirable by anyone and the best he could hope for was that some clan would want him to train him for war. He was reminded every day that no one would want him, that even his parents thought he would never be anything but an Exalted sent out to fight for a deity. Not even guaranteed the Windsinger but any deity who would take him.
??So he ran away. Before he was even fully grown Sigurrós ran from home without a word to anyone. He didn’t know where he was going, or what he was looking for, all he knew was that he couldn’t stay there anymore. He couldn’t live in a clan who only told him he was a failure, a reject, because he wasn’t born ‘pretty enough’ to earn a high dowry to another clan.
??Eventually this led him to the edge of the Sea. There he found a ship that said it was going to some strange city out there where even ugly things like Sigurrós would be accepted. Seeing it as no other option Sigurrós scrounged up some treasure for passage and left for Mu. He arrived amid the teeming city, lost and alone. But he was not the ugliest there. There were dragons of every color in Mu. It didn’t matter that they were undesirable, they were there, and they lived.
??The words his birth clan had told him weighed heavily on him though. Sigurrós has no confidence and speaks softly, hardly ever speaking up for himself. It made it difficult for him to find a place in Mu and eventually he just turned to the Caravan to continue to survive. Nadalin was sympathetic to him and allowed him to join her clan. Once part of the Caravan he thought he’d find peace and acceptance with himself, since Nadalin did not want him to be trained as a soldier to fight for the Tidelord. She just wanted him to be happy. He did not find that acceptance and didn’t know what to do.
??Then Rhodon came into his life. The eccentric Wildclaw was looking for an assistant with his flower shop after the last one quit because Rhodon was too weird for them. Sigurrós tentatively applied for the position and Rhodon took him on instantly. Little did Sigurrós know that there were no other applicants for Rhodon’s assistant. Sigurrós was taken to the ship Peonia and Rhodon took him under his wing. He taught Sigurrós all about flowers and arranging and how to care for plants of all sorts and how to identify all types of flora. Rhodon didn’t care what Sigurrós looked like, he just cared that Sigurrós could work and would listen to him.
??Rhodon also knew that Sigurrós had self esteem issues and trouble speaking up for himself and he had no tolerance for any of that. He encouraged and even demanded that Sigurrós speak his mind often and whenever he wanted, even if it was to tell Rhodon he was acting like an idiot. Sigurrós had never been treated like this by another dragon, as if he was actually worth something other than a handful of treasure. He still ended up rather surprised when he ended up crushing, horribly, on Rhodon. He knew Rhodon too well by then though and knew the playboy would never give him the real relationship he wanted. So instead he just pined from a distance.
??Rhodon was a good teacher though and Sigurrós learned a lot under him about botany and scents. It led him to become an amateur perfumer, which he sells in small vials in Peonia with Rhodon’s elaborate flower arrangements.
@TheThrane
Oh I have some lore for my derg Echo! (Lore not made by me!!!)
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"Look at the stars kid. You see them? You want to know why I love them? Well, it is the little miracles that lie in the dark if you bother to just look."
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[color=#EEEEEE]______[/color] [color=#390f5c][size=5][/size]A lonely dragon that hides everything. His pain, his suffering, his inner torment. He has been known to be a little nuts with it. He actually is quite sweet. He wants his life back. He wants everything he ever cared about back. He is a little broken. He tells nobody about this because he knows most likely nobody will listen. He is horribly depressed, but puts on a smile so nobody will be worried at all about him, even though he thinks nobody cares.[/color]
[color=#EEEEEE]______[/color] [color=#390f5c][size=5][/size][b]I can hear their murmurs about what I am, yet they are all wrong.
They trap me in a prison of their fears, fears that aren't needed if they saw me. Not if they simply looked at me, but if they saw me for who I am instead of what I look like or the darkness so beloved to me.
Hatchlings are told to stay away from me, but they come anyways. I admire their bravery in spite of what the world tells them. I try to give them what I can-- Warm food, a familiar that's taking a liking to them... but of course, it's not enough for their parents to pull them away from me with pale, horror-struck faces.
Is that what my life will be? Isolation? Fear?
Sometimes, I think I should give in.
Sometimes, I think I should be their villain. [/b][/color]
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@TheThrane
Oh I have some lore for my derg Echo! (Lore not made by me!!!)
Echo Lore wrote on 2017-03-27:
______________ECHO______________
Traveler
?
"Look at the stars kid. You see them? You want to know why I love them? Well, it is the little miracles that lie in the dark if you bother to just look."
?
______A lonely dragon that hides everything. His pain, his suffering, his inner torment. He has been known to be a little nuts with it. He actually is quite sweet. He wants his life back. He wants everything he ever cared about back. He is a little broken. He tells nobody about this because he knows most likely nobody will listen. He is horribly depressed, but puts on a smile so nobody will be worried at all about him, even though he thinks nobody cares.
______I can hear their murmurs about what I am, yet they are all wrong.
They trap me in a prison of their fears, fears that aren't needed if they saw me. Not if they simply looked at me, but if they saw me for who I am instead of what I look like or the darkness so beloved to me.
Hatchlings are told to stay away from me, but they come anyways. I admire their bravery in spite of what the world tells them. I try to give them what I can-- Warm food, a familiar that's taking a liking to them... but of course, it's not enough for their parents to pull them away from me with pale, horror-struck faces.
Is that what my life will be? Isolation? Fear?
Sometimes, I think I should give in.
@TheThrane
I'm still trying to give my dragons lore so not a lot have any, but I felt like I should share these two. Apologies for such differences in their bio templates, the Spiral came with her own and I was too lazy to change it.
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[i]So, I once found one of those messages in the bottles. You know, the ones that people toss in the sea in hopes of it finding its way to the person it was written to? I guess it didn’t make it because it found its way to me. So, anyway, I read it. It was a really cheesy poem about love or something like that. It never said who it was addressed to, but it did have a signature. Someone named Val. Maybe. I don’t remember, it’s been a few years. So I threw it back out to sea. I might’ve accidentally shattered the bottle in doing so, though.
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[left]I’m into poetry, though I kinda suck at it. I mean I’m just not a very poetic person. I enjoy it, but I’m not good at it. I once tried to write a really emotional poem and decided that I hated it so I stuffed it in a bottle and threw it out to sea. Hopefully no one found it, or it’s at the bottom of the ocean. Or forever lost in the Sea of a Thousand Currents. Just - I hope it’s gone forever.[/left]
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I'm still trying to give my dragons lore so not a lot have any, but I felt like I should share these two. Apologies for such differences in their bio templates, the Spiral came with her own and I was too lazy to change it.
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Trinkets
A razor-sharp onyx idol fashioned to resemble the Shadowbinder. The chiseled surface appears to completely absorb and obscure light.
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Shadowbinder Onyx Idol
Trinkets
A razor-sharp onyx idol fashioned to resemble the Shadowbinder. The chiseled surface appears to completely absorb and obscure light.
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Shadowbinder Onyx Idol
Trinkets
A razor-sharp onyx idol fashioned to resemble the Shadowbinder. The chiseled surface appears to completely absorb and obscure light.
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So, I once found one of those messages in the bottles. You know, the ones that people toss in the sea in hopes of it finding its way to the person it was written to? I guess it didn’t make it because it found its way to me. So, anyway, I read it. It was a really cheesy poem about love or something like that. It never said who it was addressed to, but it did have a signature. Someone named Val. Maybe. I don’t remember, it’s been a few years. So I threw it back out to sea. I might’ve accidentally shattered the bottle in doing so, though.
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Shadowbinder Onyx Idol
Trinkets
A razor-sharp onyx idol fashioned to resemble the Shadowbinder. The chiseled surface appears to completely absorb and obscure light.
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Shadowbinder Onyx Idol
Trinkets
A razor-sharp onyx idol fashioned to resemble the Shadowbinder. The chiseled surface appears to completely absorb and obscure light.
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Shadowbinder Onyx Idol
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A razor-sharp onyx idol fashioned to resemble the Shadowbinder. The chiseled surface appears to completely absorb and obscure light.
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I’m into poetry, though I kinda suck at it. I mean I’m just not a very poetic person. I enjoy it, but I’m not good at it. I once tried to write a really emotional poem and decided that I hated it so I stuffed it in a bottle and threw it out to sea. Hopefully no one found it, or it’s at the bottom of the ocean. Or forever lost in the Sea of a Thousand Currents. Just - I hope it’s gone forever.
sydney , fem , she/her, + 0
dog person
gimme that gay s--t
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@TheThrane Awww! The bios you've written for them are great; I love how we get a good idea of their personalities from their actions: Starkindler's careful attention to detail and how he returns lost things, Agnessa's joy in adopting others, etc. They're both wonderful characters. =)
I may or may not stalk your lair to check up on Marianas and Pelagius. XD I couldn't think of a good story for their mom, so I recently just wrote and coded the headcanon I had from the beginning (with a shout out to the kids). I think I'll do more like this -- short, meandering bios (instead of narratives and stories) can be pretty fun!
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@TheThrane Awww! The bios you've written for them are great; I love how we get a good idea of their personalities from their actions: Starkindler's careful attention to detail and how he returns lost things, Agnessa's joy in adopting others, etc. They're both wonderful characters. =)
I may or may not stalk your lair to check up on Marianas and Pelagius. XD I couldn't think of a good story for their mom, so I recently just wrote and coded the headcanon I had from the beginning (with a shout out to the kids). I think I'll do more like this -- short, meandering bios (instead of narratives and stories) can be pretty fun!
Oh, poor boy! Never in my life have i been more glad a dragon was saved from exaltation. And btw, I think he's pretty, the accent is very good on him ...
I love his crushing and I hope he finds true happiness and confidence in himself one day. He's really cute and I will fight for him :D
Oh that's actually really funny in a weird, whimsical way. Its so short yet it tells an interesting story and a lot about their characters. Both templates are really pretty, but I must admit to liking the imps a tad more for this kidn of bio text :D
The imp especially is also to die for look wise. He's beyond stunning in that accent!
I LOVE HER
her entire lore has a great feeling about it - ranging from a little lost and wondering to calm and content to full of fear and anger. It ranges broad over very few sentances and I'm very impressed
Generally I just love your style of writing in this particular piece. It flows very natural and is very pleasant to read. And the mention of the kiddos are so good, I'll have to write mom more into their lore now (and just generally make their lore more positive a its kind of dark and only bad right now)
Her text actually reminds me of water in how it flows so beautifully and changing. She's wonderful
Oh, poor boy! Never in my life have i been more glad a dragon was saved from exaltation. And btw, I think he's pretty, the accent is very good on him ...
I love his crushing and I hope he finds true happiness and confidence in himself one day. He's really cute and I will fight for him :D
Oh that's actually really funny in a weird, whimsical way. Its so short yet it tells an interesting story and a lot about their characters. Both templates are really pretty, but I must admit to liking the imps a tad more for this kidn of bio text :D
The imp especially is also to die for look wise. He's beyond stunning in that accent!
I LOVE HER
her entire lore has a great feeling about it - ranging from a little lost and wondering to calm and content to full of fear and anger. It ranges broad over very few sentances and I'm very impressed
Generally I just love your style of writing in this particular piece. It flows very natural and is very pleasant to read. And the mention of the kiddos are so good, I'll have to write mom more into their lore now (and just generally make their lore more positive a its kind of dark and only bad right now)
Her text actually reminds me of water in how it flows so beautifully and changing. She's wonderful
@TheThrane Thanks for looking it over! ^^ It's the first piece I've written in this vague, spacey style -- all my other lore so far has been stories with definite beginnings, middles, and ends. I'm glad you like it!
I tried to leave the part about the kids vague on purpose so it wouldn't clash with your own ideas. Nonetheless, don't be afraid to deviate from Melufina's backstory. :D
If you have any more updates, I'd be pleased to read them! I actually sometimes go through your lair, though I have to say that Marianas and Pelagius are still my faves. (I'm biased, lol!) You did an excellent job with conveying just how formidable and foreboding they are, and their relationship with each other is really interesting, too. Makes you wonder, "What's up with these two? Did something bad happen when they were kids? Were they like this from the beginning, or did someone or something influence them?" It's got just the write amount of mystery, which makes it fun to dwell on. ^_^
@TheThrane Thanks for looking it over! ^^ It's the first piece I've written in this vague, spacey style -- all my other lore so far has been stories with definite beginnings, middles, and ends. I'm glad you like it!
I tried to leave the part about the kids vague on purpose so it wouldn't clash with your own ideas. Nonetheless, don't be afraid to deviate from Melufina's backstory. :D
If you have any more updates, I'd be pleased to read them! I actually sometimes go through your lair, though I have to say that Marianas and Pelagius are still my faves. (I'm biased, lol!) You did an excellent job with conveying just how formidable and foreboding they are, and their relationship with each other is really interesting, too. Makes you wonder, "What's up with these two? Did something bad happen when they were kids? Were they like this from the beginning, or did someone or something influence them?" It's got just the write amount of mystery, which makes it fun to dwell on. ^_^
Please check the spelling of my name when pinging me: @Disillusionist. Thanks!
O_O I think.....Agnessa might be the only mirror to ever steal my heart too! I generally really dislike Mirrors, but she's amazing! And I love her lore. SUPERMAHM
Elros and Dominion are my current favorite kiddos--which is funny, coming from a water lair. I just started my lore so I only have five bios done so far (out of like.....40 *weeps*) but I think El's is gonna be tough to beat!
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Engaging | Mischievous | Nosy
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[size=2][i]“Every now and then I like to do as I'm told, just to confuse people."[/i]
? George Cooper [Tamora Pierce]
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[columns][size=2][b]Gender[/b] Male
[b]Orientation[/b] Demiromantic/pansexual
[b]Occupation[/b] Salesman
[nextcol][size=2][b]Mate[/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=105028&tab=dragon&did=16306332]Dominion[/url]
[b]Children[/b] None
[b]Friends[/b] None
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[i][b]'Y[/b][size=2]ou there,' the voice echoes. 'Yes, yes, come in, darling. No, don't be afraid of a bit of shadow, it makes the light all the stronger.'[/size]
[i][b]T[/b][size=2]he stranger has a dazzling smile, his hands gesturing wildly as he proudly shows off the wares within his shop, illuminated by glowing lanterns. 'A traveler to our watery cove, I see. Perhaps you're in need of sunscreen, a Thresher-repellent serum? Maren cream, to keep you young and supple? Cheap at twice the price, I assure you!'[/size]
[i][b]'J[/b][size=2]ust looking,' you reply, and he waves you off. 'Everyone starts off by just looking,' he says. 'But you'll be back!' He flashes a cheeky grin behind him to a silent man, tall and slender, dressed in finery that seems overly formal for a boardwalk beach shack. 'Why, even this one came back, and he swore he'd never step foot in here again.'[/size]
[i][b]'I[/b][size=2]'ve sworn that at least eight times this week, Elros,' the man says, raising an eyebrow. He looks away, drawing his hand thoughtfully down the beaded curtain, woven together from bits and bobs of things, marbles and bits of shell. 'I also seem to recall you swearing you'd never marry. "Wild and free to the rest of your days," as you put it.'[/size]
[i][b]E[/b][size=2]lros grins ruefully. 'And look how that turned out, Domi,' he hums, the lantern light catching a glinting ring on his finger. 'I somehow let you make an honest man out of me.'[/size]
[i][b]D[/b][size=2]omi laughs, a rich, deep sound. 'I don't know about honest,' he says. 'Settled, though...settled I'll give you.'[/size]
[i][b]Y[/b][size=2]ou sense that you've been nearly forgotten as Elros turns to smile at his husband. 'Dearheart,' he drawls, with a quick peck to his lips. 'It's going to be very difficult to keep you in the luxury to which you're accustomed if you keep implying a lack of trustworthiness in front of my customers.'[/size]
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O_O I think.....Agnessa might be the only mirror to ever steal my heart too! I generally really dislike Mirrors, but she's amazing! And I love her lore. SUPERMAHM
Elros and Dominion are my current favorite kiddos--which is funny, coming from a water lair. I just started my lore so I only have five bios done so far (out of like.....40 *weeps*) but I think El's is gonna be tough to beat!
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Elros
Engaging | Mischievous | Nosy
“Every now and then I like to do as I'm told, just to confuse people."
? George Cooper [Tamora Pierce] ?
Gender Male Orientation Demiromantic/pansexual Occupation Salesman
'You there,' the voice echoes. 'Yes, yes, come in, darling. No, don't be afraid of a bit of shadow, it makes the light all the stronger.'
The stranger has a dazzling smile, his hands gesturing wildly as he proudly shows off the wares within his shop, illuminated by glowing lanterns. 'A traveler to our watery cove, I see. Perhaps you're in need of sunscreen, a Thresher-repellent serum? Maren cream, to keep you young and supple? Cheap at twice the price, I assure you!'
'Just looking,' you reply, and he waves you off. 'Everyone starts off by just looking,' he says. 'But you'll be back!' He flashes a cheeky grin behind him to a silent man, tall and slender, dressed in finery that seems overly formal for a boardwalk beach shack. 'Why, even this one came back, and he swore he'd never step foot in here again.'
'I've sworn that at least eight times this week, Elros,' the man says, raising an eyebrow. He looks away, drawing his hand thoughtfully down the beaded curtain, woven together from bits and bobs of things, marbles and bits of shell. 'I also seem to recall you swearing you'd never marry. "Wild and free to the rest of your days," as you put it.'
Elros grins ruefully. 'And look how that turned out, Domi,' he hums, the lantern light catching a glinting ring on his finger. 'I somehow let you make an honest man out of me.'
Domi laughs, a rich, deep sound. 'I don't know about honest,' he says. 'Settled, though...settled I'll give you.'
You sense that you've been nearly forgotten as Elros turns to smile at his husband. 'Dearheart,' he drawls, with a quick peck to his lips. 'It's going to be very difficult to keep you in the luxury to which you're accustomed if you keep implying a lack of trustworthiness in front of my customers.'
Omen Seeker
Meat
Many seekers never grow a third eye. As a result, their size and intelligence is greatly diminished.
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Umbral Yarn
Dragonmade
A coil of dusky yarn, spun from the silky hair of the Umbral Wolf. It produces a faint howling sound as it unravels.
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Dusk Jadevine
Plant
This species of Jadevine appeared shriveled during the day, and opens during the evening to absorb moisture.