@Clandestino
Abigail curls herself tighter around the chair, startled. "I-it's quite alright! I'll just check to make sure it meets all the requirements," she said, taking it out of the envelope. "hmm, it looks like you're missing a syllable in the second line for it to be a proper haiku. Could you add a syllable please? Then we can take it back and it can be counted." She smiled warmly at him.
Your second line is missing a syllable. Haikus follow a 5/7/5 syllable format and your second line has only six. Please correct this as soon as possible.
Abigail curls herself tighter around the chair, startled. "I-it's quite alright! I'll just check to make sure it meets all the requirements," she said, taking it out of the envelope. "hmm, it looks like you're missing a syllable in the second line for it to be a proper haiku. Could you add a syllable please? Then we can take it back and it can be counted." She smiled warmly at him.
Your second line is missing a syllable. Haikus follow a 5/7/5 syllable format and your second line has only six. Please correct this as soon as possible.