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@rainphee

I know exactly what you mean... It's why I could let Tess not help look after her!

@Aetherstorm

I'm glad you like them, they are a lot of fun to write! Thank you so much for the ideas by the way, I'll work something out now that my emotions have died down...

@CleverDual

I KNOW, RIGHT???

@Disillusionist

I didn't have the heart to have Ruby completely raised by a heartless fool. She needed some love and protection, before Quartz's training accidentally killed her...

The original plan was to send him out as a travelling dragon and when he was returned to me, do a big reunion scene where Plagueheart and Oriel find out he isn't dead and his lore would be influenced by the adventures other people wrote about him. I didn't plan on keeping him forever when he returned, but I did want his family to know he was okay... Now it feels like I saved his life in the lore for nothing and it's just an unsolved plot hole. But, it'll be a great challenge to figure out how to work Pennar back into the story and wrap up that plot hole without it feeling forced!

@lilastar

Thank you for the suggestions! That's really helpful!!!

@RiaFire11

*Screams with you*

@Kizzan

Let's just put it this way: all three children (or I guess not so much children anymore, more like teenagers) have an interesting destiny...
@rainphee

I know exactly what you mean... It's why I could let Tess not help look after her!

@Aetherstorm

I'm glad you like them, they are a lot of fun to write! Thank you so much for the ideas by the way, I'll work something out now that my emotions have died down...

@CleverDual

I KNOW, RIGHT???

@Disillusionist

I didn't have the heart to have Ruby completely raised by a heartless fool. She needed some love and protection, before Quartz's training accidentally killed her...

The original plan was to send him out as a travelling dragon and when he was returned to me, do a big reunion scene where Plagueheart and Oriel find out he isn't dead and his lore would be influenced by the adventures other people wrote about him. I didn't plan on keeping him forever when he returned, but I did want his family to know he was okay... Now it feels like I saved his life in the lore for nothing and it's just an unsolved plot hole. But, it'll be a great challenge to figure out how to work Pennar back into the story and wrap up that plot hole without it feeling forced!

@lilastar

Thank you for the suggestions! That's really helpful!!!

@RiaFire11

*Screams with you*

@Kizzan

Let's just put it this way: all three children (or I guess not so much children anymore, more like teenagers) have an interesting destiny...
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----- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2383572/23#post_33780916]Previous[/url][/center] ----- [center][b][u]Chapter 46: A Cold South Wind[/u][/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=41173788] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/411738/41173788_350.png[/img] [/url][/center] The breeze of the Windswept Plateau felt warm compared to the cold cells of the Fortress of Ends. Rhowen never expected he'd be free again, yet here he was, freed by Quartz and now forever indebted to him. His mission: protecting Quartz's daughter at all costs. Personally, Rhowen thought it was a terrible idea, but you couldn't argue with the man who gave you your freedom, especially not when you had a ruby tail-ring of a contract to bind your service. So really, when he thought about it, Rhowen wasn't free at all, he was just in another kind of prison. But whatever, he had worked for dragons like Quartz before. He could handle looking after a spoiled little princess of a dragon. Rhowen squeezed his hands together as he waited for his escort to Quartz's mansion. This was not a nervous tick, just simply a way to keep his strong elemental magic in check. Whenever he lost control, he ended up freezing a clan. The first time it had happened, he had been a hatchling and it had just sort of slipped out. The next few times had been intentional, on the orders of Crime Lord Mercer. He didn't work for Mercer anymore, and he hoped his new boss never found out he did or else he could be in big trouble. In fact, the only reason he was happy to do this was because it was his only hope at destroying Mercer. That was his plan: destroy Mercer, destroy Quartz, live a free life, atoning for his crimes. [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=41890810] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/418909/41890810_350.png[/img] [/url][/center] "Ah, you're the Rho guy, ain't you?" Kulshan asked as he approached the newcomer. "I'm Kulshan, but my friends call me Kully. Welcome to the team!" "I'm not here to make friends, I have a job to do." Rhowen said curtly. If this dragon worked for Quartz he would likely be dead with time. Quartz had a track record of losing those who worked for him. Best not get attached, that's what he had learned from his time with Mercer. "Come on buddy, there's no need to be harsh." Kulshan said, looking rather disappointing. "I was just trying to make you feel welcome." "And I appreciate it." Rhowen admitted with a nod. Kulshan looked to be not much older than he was. He supposed he was still getting used to the harshness of the world. Though he was an ice dragon, he didn't want to be cold. "Well, I guess there's no use standing around. Let me take you to meet the Boss." Kulshan shrugged and began to lead the newcomer away from the tower and towards the gazebo that Quartz had indicated he'd be opening a portal in for Rhowen's arrival. As they walked in silence, Rhowen put his concentration into the ice magic flowing through his body, radiating through his frozen heart. ----- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2383572/25#post_33819028]Next[/url][/center] ----- [center]@CleverDual @Alwaid @zzzhorses @Skyeset @ScrivenerRook @Kizzan @clarax @lilastar @tigressRising @Disillusionist @Aetherstorm @rainphee @RiaFire11[/center] ----- Well, looks like Mercer is getting closer and closer to Windkeep Tower... Here is Ruby's guard, and it looks like Quartz is getting on his feet again...


Chapter 46: A Cold South Wind



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The breeze of the Windswept Plateau felt warm compared to the cold cells of the Fortress of Ends. Rhowen never expected he'd be free again, yet here he was, freed by Quartz and now forever indebted to him. His mission: protecting Quartz's daughter at all costs.

Personally, Rhowen thought it was a terrible idea, but you couldn't argue with the man who gave you your freedom, especially not when you had a ruby tail-ring of a contract to bind your service. So really, when he thought about it, Rhowen wasn't free at all, he was just in another kind of prison. But whatever, he had worked for dragons like Quartz before. He could handle looking after a spoiled little princess of a dragon.

Rhowen squeezed his hands together as he waited for his escort to Quartz's mansion. This was not a nervous tick, just simply a way to keep his strong elemental magic in check. Whenever he lost control, he ended up freezing a clan. The first time it had happened, he had been a hatchling and it had just sort of slipped out. The next few times had been intentional, on the orders of Crime Lord Mercer. He didn't work for Mercer anymore, and he hoped his new boss never found out he did or else he could be in big trouble.

In fact, the only reason he was happy to do this was because it was his only hope at destroying Mercer. That was his plan: destroy Mercer, destroy Quartz, live a free life, atoning for his crimes.

"Ah, you're the Rho guy, ain't you?" Kulshan asked as he approached the newcomer. "I'm Kulshan, but my friends call me Kully. Welcome to the team!"

"I'm not here to make friends, I have a job to do." Rhowen said curtly. If this dragon worked for Quartz he would likely be dead with time. Quartz had a track record of losing those who worked for him. Best not get attached, that's what he had learned from his time with Mercer.

"Come on buddy, there's no need to be harsh." Kulshan said, looking rather disappointing. "I was just trying to make you feel welcome."

"And I appreciate it." Rhowen admitted with a nod. Kulshan looked to be not much older than he was. He supposed he was still getting used to the harshness of the world. Though he was an ice dragon, he didn't want to be cold.

"Well, I guess there's no use standing around. Let me take you to meet the Boss." Kulshan shrugged and began to lead the newcomer away from the tower and towards the gazebo that Quartz had indicated he'd be opening a portal in for Rhowen's arrival. As they walked in silence, Rhowen put his concentration into the ice magic flowing through his body, radiating through his frozen heart.


Well, looks like Mercer is getting closer and closer to Windkeep Tower... Here is Ruby's guard, and it looks like Quartz is getting on his feet again...
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@Petall OH MY GOODNESS THIS JUST MADE MY DAY SO MUCH BETTER!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE Rho sooooo much!!!!
@Petall OH MY GOODNESS THIS JUST MADE MY DAY SO MUCH BETTER!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE Rho sooooo much!!!!
@CleverDual

THANK YOU SO MUCH YOUR COMMENT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME!!!
@CleverDual

THANK YOU SO MUCH YOUR COMMENT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME!!!
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@Petall *whistles* Rhowen looks awesome, daaaaang. And he's a complicated chap, isn't he? I read about that part about him being indebted to Quartz forever and shrugged...only to run slam-bang into him planning to destroy Mercer and Quartz.

*sweats nervously* Kully, old boy, you're surrounded by frightening people. D:

(Plus Rhowen's theme is one of my Disney faves. Waaaay better than "Let It Go", imo! ^^)
@Petall *whistles* Rhowen looks awesome, daaaaang. And he's a complicated chap, isn't he? I read about that part about him being indebted to Quartz forever and shrugged...only to run slam-bang into him planning to destroy Mercer and Quartz.

*sweats nervously* Kully, old boy, you're surrounded by frightening people. D:

(Plus Rhowen's theme is one of my Disney faves. Waaaay better than "Let It Go", imo! ^^)
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@Disillusionist

Rhowen certainly has a lot going on, that's for sure!

(If I'm being completely honest, I do like Let it Go, but Frozen Heart is just epic and when it hit me that Rhowen was going to have intense ice powers, my mind immediately went to that song.)
@Disillusionist

Rhowen certainly has a lot going on, that's for sure!

(If I'm being completely honest, I do like Let it Go, but Frozen Heart is just epic and when it hit me that Rhowen was going to have intense ice powers, my mind immediately went to that song.)
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I have a dragon who's name is Rho. At one point I exalted him, then got him back with the dragon restoration.
I have a dragon who's name is Rho. At one point I exalted him, then got him back with the dragon restoration.
please buy my dragons
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alphabet legacy
challenge
please just send private auctions.
it's a CR with half the hassle,
and with PAs we both get our stuff instantly.
@RiaFire11

That sounds really really cool! Rho is a good name! I'm glad you were able to get him back
@RiaFire11

That sounds really really cool! Rho is a good name! I'm glad you were able to get him back
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@Petall

I just blew through a few of your first entries. These are lovely! You're inspiring me to maybe write my own clan lore sometime soon....keep it up!!
@Petall

I just blew through a few of your first entries. These are lovely! You're inspiring me to maybe write my own clan lore sometime soon....keep it up!!
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THE PLAGUE FLIGHT IS DOMINATING!
@SommerBee

Thank you so much!!! Your comment really made my day! Would you like to be added to the pinglist when you catch up? Also, when you write your own clan lore, I'd love a ping!!! I love reading other people's lore!!!
@SommerBee

Thank you so much!!! Your comment really made my day! Would you like to be added to the pinglist when you catch up? Also, when you write your own clan lore, I'd love a ping!!! I love reading other people's lore!!!
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