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TOPIC | Poems For Your Dergs!
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@VoxxVoluer
Sorry that this took a bit longer than the others to get to you, but I hope you enjoy it! I just hope I got the characterization down well, she's very complex.
Everything, and yet nothing.
A husk to one's simple eye.
Destroyer of entire Clans with the bat of a wing,
A force to be reckoned with.

She appears, though not ever there,
Gone without a single trace.
Her work is efficient, apathetic in motion,
Set at an acceptable pace.

Shade inflicted left her a husk,
Sucking away her little hope like a needle.
Her pearly aura now as dim as dusk,
Others left weak and feeble.

Bit by bit, dragon foes fell,
Piece by piece, old bits dropped with no reason to dwell.

What was nothing was now something,
What was something was a monster.
What was a monster was now hunting,
You could only hope it wasn't you.

@VoxxVoluer
Sorry that this took a bit longer than the others to get to you, but I hope you enjoy it! I just hope I got the characterization down well, she's very complex.
Everything, and yet nothing.
A husk to one's simple eye.
Destroyer of entire Clans with the bat of a wing,
A force to be reckoned with.

She appears, though not ever there,
Gone without a single trace.
Her work is efficient, apathetic in motion,
Set at an acceptable pace.

Shade inflicted left her a husk,
Sucking away her little hope like a needle.
Her pearly aura now as dim as dusk,
Others left weak and feeble.

Bit by bit, dragon foes fell,
Piece by piece, old bits dropped with no reason to dwell.

What was nothing was now something,
What was something was a monster.
What was a monster was now hunting,
You could only hope it wasn't you.

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Good characters are like geodes: To see their true beauty, you must break them.


-Let me write you a poem, maybe?-

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you are all fantastic,
if you see this have a very lovely day
Anybody else want a poem?
Anybody else want a poem?
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0AniMUO.gif

Good characters are like geodes: To see their true beauty, you must break them.


-Let me write you a poem, maybe?-

q1INfTU.gif
you are all fantastic,
if you see this have a very lovely day
@septarianflare Dragon Picture: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36556960] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/365570/36556960_350.png[/img] [/url] [b]Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?:[/b] Uh, not really, she's a warrior for my clan. That is all. [b]Is there a bio description to be read?: [/b]No [b]Anything extra you'd like to add?: [/b]Feel free to go creative with her, and maybe even create a backstory or personality for her within your poem! : ) Thanks!! :D
@septarianflare
Dragon Picture:

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Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?: Uh, not really, she's a warrior for my clan. That is all.
Is there a bio description to be read?: No
Anything extra you'd like to add?: Feel free to go creative with her, and maybe even create a backstory or personality for her within your poem! : )

Thanks!! :D
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@septarianflare - I usually avoid poems for dragons, but this little lady is a new dragon of my and I adore her to little pieces. Edit: Of course I can tip! [b]Dragon Picture:[/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36226957] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/362270/36226957_350.png[/img] [/url] [b]Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?:[/b] Important info is in her bio. [b]Is there a bio description to be read?:[/b] Yes, it is in her bio. [b]Anything extra you'd like to add?:[/b] I would like the poem to be about both Momma and Mirai, so like their life together or the such.
@septarianflare - I usually avoid poems for dragons, but this little lady is a new dragon of my and I adore her to little pieces.

Edit: Of course I can tip!

Dragon Picture:

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Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?:
Important info is in her bio.

Is there a bio description to be read?:
Yes, it is in her bio.

Anything extra you'd like to add?:
I would like the poem to be about both Momma and Mirai, so like their life together or the such.
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[b]@septarianflare[/b] [indent][size=2][b]Dragon Picture:[/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=30788700] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/307888/30788700_350.png[/img] [/url] [b]Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?: [/b]she has lore and art in her bio. [b]Is there a bio description to be read?:[/b] ^ [b]Anything extra you'd like to add?:[/b] feel free to go however you wish with this. i'm not too picky on anything.[/size][/indent]
@septarianflare

Dragon Picture:
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Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?: she has lore and art in her bio.
Is there a bio description to be read?: ^
Anything extra you'd like to add?: feel free to go however you wish with this. i'm not too picky on anything.
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@ChristineDaae
Hope this is creative enough! I tried to figure out how a warrior would fit in with the rest of the clan, so here it is.
The night flutters down,
As the witching hour comes into play.
Ghouls, ghosts and wizards take flight,
An odd little sort of array.

A misfit even in this land,
A warrior comes out at this time.
Guarding over the clan with ease,
A stature so tall and grand.

The warrior watches over the sights,
Making sure no new haunts get through.
Atop a tall point the Ridge stands,
An array so lively, rising anew.

This warrior creature is a knight,
Both a misfit yet belonging in this land.
Helping order shine in a new light,
Making sure clan mates do not tear each other apart.

Between witches, wizards, musicians and ghosts,
The knight is the most feared.
For this knight could restore order to the clan,
For to many, she is revered.
@ChristineDaae
Hope this is creative enough! I tried to figure out how a warrior would fit in with the rest of the clan, so here it is.
The night flutters down,
As the witching hour comes into play.
Ghouls, ghosts and wizards take flight,
An odd little sort of array.

A misfit even in this land,
A warrior comes out at this time.
Guarding over the clan with ease,
A stature so tall and grand.

The warrior watches over the sights,
Making sure no new haunts get through.
Atop a tall point the Ridge stands,
An array so lively, rising anew.

This warrior creature is a knight,
Both a misfit yet belonging in this land.
Helping order shine in a new light,
Making sure clan mates do not tear each other apart.

Between witches, wizards, musicians and ghosts,
The knight is the most feared.
For this knight could restore order to the clan,
For to many, she is revered.
CedVBCC.png
0AniMUO.gif

Good characters are like geodes: To see their true beauty, you must break them.


-Let me write you a poem, maybe?-

q1INfTU.gif
you are all fantastic,
if you see this have a very lovely day
@septarianflare

Aah! It's amazing thank you so much! **Sending a tip!
@septarianflare

Aah! It's amazing thank you so much! **Sending a tip!
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@septarianflare [b]Dragon Picture:[/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=27797776] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/277978/27797776_350.png[/img] [/url] [b]Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?:[/b] Ancient spirit trapped in dragon form since the beginning of the fourth age, alive since the second age. Used to be a legend, and fought for a young warlord who tricked her into loving him and used her to take over most of Sornieth, before trapping her in dragon form with the jewelry she's wearing. [b]Is there a bio description to be read?: Yes [b]Anything extra you'd like to add?:[/b] idk flex ur creative muscles
@septarianflare
Dragon Picture:


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Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?: Ancient spirit trapped in dragon form since the beginning of the fourth age, alive since the second age. Used to be a legend, and fought for a young warlord who tricked her into loving him and used her to take over most of Sornieth, before trapping her in dragon form with the jewelry she's wearing.
Is there a bio description to be read?: Yes
Anything extra you'd like to add?: idk flex ur creative muscles
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@septarianflare Dragon Picture: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36127250] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/361273/36127250_350.png[/img] [/url] Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?: mercenary, his wings and crest consist of embers and smoke that he can control to his will, tracker that can utilize stealth attacks, quietly eliminate threats, gather recon, sneaking ahead Is there a bio description to be read?: Yes, a lot actually! Anything extra you'd like to add?: thanks!!! this is nice of u to do!
@septarianflare
Dragon Picture:
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Bits of Vital Info I Should Know?: mercenary, his wings and crest consist of embers and smoke that he can control to his will, tracker that can utilize stealth attacks, quietly eliminate threats, gather recon, sneaking ahead

Is there a bio description to be read?: Yes, a lot actually!

Anything extra you'd like to add?: thanks!!! this is nice of u to do!
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@Zuron
Wasn't entirely happy with how the first one I wrote for the two came out, so I wrote another. Here's both poems anyways.
A lonesome egg of one kind,
Raised by an enemy of her own.
Two unlikely creatures together,
Fates intertwined.

Unlikely allies they were,
Becoming one of the same scales.
But as unlikely as it seemed,
A truly wonderful tale.

Two creatures of different species,
Becoming inseparable in time.
Due to maternal instincts alone,
Allied without a treaty.
Mirai, the lonesome child.
An egg unwanted,
Abandoned in the wild.

Momma, an aspiring mother.
A creature of unbridled kindness,
Yet left with no other.

Together they live, although the creatures differ,
Their goal to survive is greater than any other.
Through maternal instincts and relations they pride,
For together they have surpassed odds and through life they do glide.
@Zuron
Wasn't entirely happy with how the first one I wrote for the two came out, so I wrote another. Here's both poems anyways.
A lonesome egg of one kind,
Raised by an enemy of her own.
Two unlikely creatures together,
Fates intertwined.

Unlikely allies they were,
Becoming one of the same scales.
But as unlikely as it seemed,
A truly wonderful tale.

Two creatures of different species,
Becoming inseparable in time.
Due to maternal instincts alone,
Allied without a treaty.
Mirai, the lonesome child.
An egg unwanted,
Abandoned in the wild.

Momma, an aspiring mother.
A creature of unbridled kindness,
Yet left with no other.

Together they live, although the creatures differ,
Their goal to survive is greater than any other.
Through maternal instincts and relations they pride,
For together they have surpassed odds and through life they do glide.
CedVBCC.png
0AniMUO.gif

Good characters are like geodes: To see their true beauty, you must break them.


-Let me write you a poem, maybe?-

q1INfTU.gif
you are all fantastic,
if you see this have a very lovely day
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