The <div class="itemdesc"> in #tooltip-732 (Shock Ability Stone) reads:
[quote]Shocks the enemy with electricity. Has a chance to apply Paralysis. (The target has a chance to prohibited from using abilities.) May only be used by lightning dragons.[/quote]
Should read:
[quote]Shocks the enemy with electricity. Has a chance to apply Paralysis. (The target has a chance to [b]be[/b] prohibited from using abilities.) May only be used by lightning dragons.[/quote]
The <div class="itemdesc"> in #tooltip-732 (Shock Ability Stone) reads:
Quote:
Shocks the enemy with electricity. Has a chance to apply Paralysis. (The target has a chance to prohibited from using abilities.) May only be used by lightning dragons.
Should read:
Quote:
Shocks the enemy with electricity. Has a chance to apply Paralysis. (The target has a chance to be prohibited from using abilities.) May only be used by lightning dragons.
FRT +8
[item=quetzeel]
Quetzeels are a sign of good luck for fishers, as [b]they're[/b] hunting patterns closely mirror the peak breeding seasons of many species of fish.
"[b]They're[/b]" should be "[b]their[/b]"
Quetzeels are a sign of good luck for fishers, as their hunting patterns closely mirror the peak breeding seasons of many species of fish.
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Quetzeels are a sign of good luck for fishers, as they're hunting patterns closely mirror the peak breeding seasons of many species of fish.
"They're" should be "their"
My bones are made of feathers, and my heart beats with the breeze.
[item=frosttangle strangler]
Seems to be missing a word at the end.
[item=tangled band]
"It's" should be "Its".
[item=questionable fashion]
First letter in sentence isn't capitalized on this one.
An uncommon sight in the Boreal Wood, they often seek out hot springs to soak in.
2600
'site' should be 'sight'
Frosttangle Strangler
Familiar
The white growths on this strangler's hide allow it to blend into the snow-covered landscape of Boreal Wood.
2600
Missing a 'the'
[item= pebblehide stoat] "escape when their pursuers to stop to"
[item= deadwood strangler] another odd phrasing using "to", "waiting for to snare"
[item= snowy owlynx] "is in incapable"
Solar Voles tend to burrow deep in the ground, making them difficult prey to catch. They occasionally resurface to soak in sunlight, giving them a radiant glow.
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"borrow" is used instead of "burrow".
Pebblehide Stoat
Familiar
When hunted, they can shed on command, allowing them to escape when their pursuers to stop to empty the pebbles out of their shoes.
Pebblehide Stoat
Familiar
When hunted, they can shed on command, allowing them to escape when their pursuers to stop to empty the pebbles out of their shoes.
“I look inside myself and see my heart is black”
I'm glad I found this thread! I was going to report all the typos in Bug Reporting XD All of the above should be fixed and also these:
(@Staff: Do you need help editing tooltips before they go live? I can help, I'll do it pro bono or on consult in exchange for rare familiars, skins, and clothing!)
Plaguebringer's Delight
Seafood
Unlike its tastier equivalent, this lobster carries various dragon-specific diseases within its body to protect it from becoming a fancy dinner.
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Quote:
Unlike its tastier equivalent, this lobster carries various dragon-specific diseases within its body to protect it from becoming a fancy dinner.
'within its body' is dead wood, it's superfluous.
Mammophant Snout
Meat
Mammophant Snout can make a decorative garnish around the edge of a fancy dish; unfortunately it's not very tasty.
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Quote:
Mammophant Snout can make a decorative garnish around the edge of a fancy dish, unfortunately it's not very tasty.
The comma separating the two clauses is inappropriate. It should be two separate sentences, with a comma after 'Unfortunately,' or it could also be written with a semi-colon, like this:
'Mammophant Snout can make a decorative garnish around the edge of a fancy dish; unfortunately, it's not very tasty.'
I'm glad I found this thread! I was going to report all the typos in Bug Reporting XD All of the above should be fixed and also these:
(@Staff: Do you need help editing tooltips before they go live? I can help, I'll do it pro bono or on consult in exchange for rare familiars, skins, and clothing!)
Plaguebringer's Delight
Seafood
Unlike its tastier equivalent, this lobster carries various dragon-specific diseases within its body to protect it from becoming a fancy dinner.
39
4
Quote:
Unlike its tastier equivalent, this lobster carries various dragon-specific diseases within its body to protect it from becoming a fancy dinner.
'within its body' is dead wood, it's superfluous.
Mammophant Snout
Meat
Mammophant Snout can make a decorative garnish around the edge of a fancy dish; unfortunately it's not very tasty.
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4
Quote:
Mammophant Snout can make a decorative garnish around the edge of a fancy dish, unfortunately it's not very tasty.
The comma separating the two clauses is inappropriate. It should be two separate sentences, with a comma after 'Unfortunately,' or it could also be written with a semi-colon, like this:
'Mammophant Snout can make a decorative garnish around the edge of a fancy dish; unfortunately, it's not very tasty.'
FRT +8
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