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[item=Kelpie] I don't know if I'm just being overly picky, but something about the description of the kelpie looks wrong to me. I think it should say: 'Most dragons are too large to practically ride a kelpie, and as such [b]they[/b] are regarded as allies, not prey.' I could just be reading it wrong, though.

@Saeginko [quote name="Saeginko" date=2017-05-21 19:26:08] [item=Kelpie] I don't know if I'm just being overly picky, but something about the description of the kelpie looks wrong to me. I think it should say: 'Most dragons are too large to practically ride a kelpie, and as such [b]they[/b] are regarded as allies, not prey.' I could just be reading it wrong, though. [/quote]I think the sentence is right. 'Most dragons are too large to practically ride a kelpie, and as such are regarded as allies, not prey.' Recording to a dictionary, 'such' can be used as a pronoun, too, which might be the case here.I'd more think 'such' could be changed to 'they', which isn't necesary though... I guess.

[item=Unfinished Painting] "its not unfinished" should be "it's not unfinished".

@BraveEguana

True, it does look reasonably okay without the 'they' involved. It's entirely possible that it could just be my nitpicking for writing coming into play, for all I know. XD

@BraveEguana @Saeginko I actually think Saeginko's original opinion is partially correct. [quote name="Saeginko" date=2017-05-21 19:26:08] [item=Kelpie] I don't know if I'm just being overly picky, but something about the description of the kelpie looks wrong to me. I think it should say: 'Most dragons are too large to practically ride a kelpie, and as such [b]they[/b] are regarded as allies, not prey.' I could just be reading it wrong, though. [/quote] The original subject of the sentence is "dragons," but after the comma, the subject shifts to kelpies. However, because the last subject of the sentence was "dragons" it should say "and as such [b]kelpies[/b] are regarded as allies, not prey." This is because regardless of whether you use they or keep the original sentence structure, you would technically be talking about DRAGONS being regarded as allies instead of prey.

kinda nit-picky, but [item=molten wartoad] in the tooltip, it says "magma armor", but magma is actually called lava once it reaches the surface, so while "magma armor" does sound cool, it's kinda incorrect. It should be "lava armor".

[img]http://i.imgur.com/eUuS2AQ.png[/img] Tomo says that "[b]a dragon[/b]" and later says "[b]now they are[/b]" Using [b]a[/b] implies that it is singular a and using [b]they[/b] implies plural so either [b]a [/b] should be changed to [b]some[/b] or [b]they[/b] should be changed to [b]he[/b] or [b]she[/b] If that is not the case, well then, screw pronouns! No hate! [img]https://turboportal.ru/uploads/posts/2013-12/thumbs/1388299332__.jpeg[/img]

On Auction or forum: [item=Sköll] But true names is: [u][b]Sköll[/b][/u] and it's works in dragon bio! (eg. wishlist in sygnature)

In the Encyclopedia's page for Coatls, under Lairs, it says "Ashfall waste". Shouldn't it be "Ashfall Waste" because it's a proper noun? I didn't have time to check this entire thread so I apologize if someone has mentioned this error before.