A scarlet trail in the sky intimidates and impresses, if you're into that sort of thing.
20
"A scarlet trail in the sky intimidates and impresses, if you're into that sort of thing". Into is only used for changes that result in coming in contact with something/entrance somewhere. I think that's not what the blurb is going for, so it should be "in to", not "into."
A scarlet trail in the sky intimidates and impresses, if you're into that sort of thing.
20
"A scarlet trail in the sky intimidates and impresses, if you're into that sort of thing". Into is only used for changes that result in coming in contact with something/entrance somewhere. I think that's not what the blurb is going for, so it should be "in to", not "into."
I used to be deathly afraid of the Hokey Pokey, Elevators, and Hurdles. I've finally decided to turn myself around- I took steps to avoid my fear until I got over it.
Sticky Webbing- "It is useful as an adhesive for craftsman" should probably be "for craftsmen."
Sticky Webbing- "It is useful as an adhesive for craftsman" should probably be "for craftsmen."
So I was at Tomo's Trivia Tablet and she asked me this:
[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/zTWS3S5.png[/img][/center]
That question, no matter how many times I read it, sounds extremely awkward...
Perhaps:
"What notable physical feature about themselves do male Guardians take pride in?"
I don't know if this has been reported before, but any Materials that drop in the Coli always seem to be referred to as Trinkets instead.
[quote name="HissingNoodle" date=2017-05-18 08:56:36]
[item=yella highnoon hank]
.. It used to be yellow, right?
[/quote]
@HissingNoodle It's always been that way. That's intentional, to reflect common "Western" pronunciation, e.g., "Yer yella!" meaning cowardly.
@mithrel Hmmm, seems I don't remember it well then xD
Thank you for telling me!
[item=Green Goo]
Missing a period at the end of the second sentence.
[item=Copper Muck]
Has an extra period at the end of the second sentence. (other Muck doesn't have this)
[item=Searing Jackalope]
"This species of hare has flame retardant coat." Should probably be "This species of hare has a flame-retardant coat."
[item=Umbra Wolf]
Not sure, but maybe "wolf" should be capitalized because it's part of the familiar name?
[item=Scarlet Serpenta]
"scarlet serpenta" isn't capitalized. Also, "The coat of a scarlet serpenta's vibrant namesake" just sounds wrong. maybe "The vibrant coat of a Scarlet Serpenta's namesake"? The coat is vibrant, not the namesake.
[item=Wendigo]
Another unsure, but "wendigo" might need to be captitalized.
(Apologies if someone has already reported any of these!)
A mysterious pile of green goo. It is pulsating with an eerie internal glow and giving off the pleasant aroma of burnt rubber.
0
Missing a period at the end of the second sentence.
Copper Muck
Transmutation
A bubbling mass of copper muck with a brilliant metallic surface. It is pockmarked with tiny gaseous boils.
0
Has an extra period at the end of the second sentence. (other Muck doesn't have this)
Searing Jackalope
Familiar
This species of hare has a flame retardant coat. When navigating scorched terrain, stray embers are frequently caught in its horns.
1800
"This species of hare has flame retardant coat." Should probably be "This species of hare has a flame-retardant coat."
Umbra Wolf
Familiar
Umbra wolves are adept at blending into the shadows. The unwary dragon may find itself surrounded by a pack it never saw coming.
2300
Not sure, but maybe "wolf" should be capitalized because it's part of the familiar name?
Scarlet Serpenta
Familiar
The coat of a scarlet serpenta's vibrant namesake is only red for a two week duration each year. When this change occurs the serpenta is dangerous and unpredictable. (Colored by NeroGravity.)
1300
"scarlet serpenta" isn't capitalized. Also, "The coat of a scarlet serpenta's vibrant namesake" just sounds wrong. maybe "The vibrant coat of a Scarlet Serpenta's namesake"? The coat is vibrant, not the namesake.
Another unsure, but "wendigo" might need to be captitalized.
(Apologies if someone has already reported any of these!)
i found this
[item=pale smallmouth]
[quote]These fish are unable to tolerate water touched by plaguebringer's brood. Their presence is a good indication if the water is safe to drink.[/quote]
is plaguebringer supposed to be lowercase? there's no "the" before it, too.
