Here are the ones I found in the breed encyclopedia entries! A lot of these are super nitpicky, but I really enjoy proofreading and figured it couldn't hurt to post them :>
Bogsneak:
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It is unlikely a foe will see a Bogsneak until its too late...
"Its" should be "it's."
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...as it is a painful nuisance to be set upon a defensive pack of Bogsneaks.
Should be "to be set upon
by a defensive pack of Bogsneaks."
Coatl:
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Coatl dragons are mid-sized breed...
Should be "are
a mid-sized breed."
Fae:
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Fae are particularly sensitive to the magic of the world around it.
Should be "the world around
them."
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A fae that battles in a land charged with opposing elemental energy and no lines of unaligned magic will have only its natural reserves to draw upon, and will have to choose the spells it casts with care; The fae have smaller internal reserves of magic than most species.
Bolded "the" should be lowercase.
Imperials:
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The exception to this tolerance is the Pearlcatcher species; The two breeds have a mutual disdain of their cousin species.
Bolded "the" should be lowercase.
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These ghastly behemoths are a mindless monstrosity, fused from the bodies of fallen Imperials with some specimens known to haved reached over 100 meters in length,
Comma should be a period.
Mirrors:
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Mirror dragons prefer travel and hunt with their own kind...
Should be "prefer
to travel and hunt with their own kind."
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These structures are abandoned when a pack had depleted all a hunting ground and moves onto a new territory.
Had should be has.
Nocturnes:
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Nocturnes are a species that adapts and mimics dragons they are in close proximity with; A nocturne who accompanies a guardian may adopt a temporary charge of their own...
Bolded "a" should be lowercase.
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Nocturne who remain among their own kind frequently generate feedback loops, Their personalities and behaviors are passed from one individual to the next in an lengthy communal games of copycat.
Comma should be a period, or it should be a semicolon with a lowercase "their" following.
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However, they do not excel at is physical confrontations.
"Is" should be removed.
Skydancers
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Their ability to read energy and emotion make them excellent at questioning feuding clan members and ferret out the truth of a situation.
"Make" should be "makes" and "ferret" should be "ferreting."
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Members of this species prefer act as scouts and collect intelligence for their clan over directly participating in a melee or major casting.
This should either be "
to act" or "acting" and "collecting."
Snappers
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Their standard tactics involve trampling smaller foes beneath their bulk or use their powerful jaws to snap them out of the air.
"Use" should be "using."
Tundras
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Tundra dragons who join flights in warmer climes never see their winter coats, (Though their summer coat is more than enough to cause heat exhaustion in locations such as the Viridian Labyrinth, Ashfall Waste, and Shifting Expanse.
The comma should be removed, "though" should be lowercase, and there should be a closing parenthesis after "Shifting Expanse."
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Companionable silence is welcome, as is simply listening to other dragons tales.
"Dragons" should be "dragons
' " with an apostrophe at the end.